A Day To Remember
Two strangers meet along a walk in the woods4 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
At least he didn't die alone and you learned so much about his life before he took his last breath. You learned of love and sadness he had in his life andhr learned not to hate but how low and understanding.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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At least he didn't die alone and you learned so much about his life before he took his last breath. You learned of love and sadness he had in his life andhr learned not to hate but how low and understanding.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Hi there, country ranch writer. Thank you so much for your review.
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Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a good story (poem). It was well written and definitely a good contest.
I like the ending to pick up the last two words of PIPE and FLOWER. It is a clever way to meet the requirements of the contest.
Excellent job.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is a good story (poem). It was well written and definitely a good contest.
I like the ending to pick up the last two words of PIPE and FLOWER. It is a clever way to meet the requirements of the contest.
Excellent job.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your kind review. Though the word PIPE, was mentioned earlier in the poem, the word FLOWER was the last word that was needed. It was fun to write. Thanks again, Mr. Green
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really really good but i would make the word bigger or capitalize it and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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this is really really good but i would make the word bigger or capitalize it and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for your review, and for your kind words.
Comment from Anne Johnston
A day to remember is a fitting title for your story-poem. You have used all the words that were required and given us all something to think about. May I suggest highlighting the special words.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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A day to remember is a fitting title for your story-poem. You have used all the words that were required and given us all something to think about. May I suggest highlighting the special words.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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I didn't know I could do that. Thank you.
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I'm not sure how you do it but maybe someone else could help you.
