If At First You Don't Succeed...
Try, try again!22 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
I enjoyed your poem because it tells a happy story and you did well using the words for the contest. You have a smooth flow of words and lines. I like how this young lady never gives up and she gets her man. Excellent story in a poem.
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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I enjoyed your poem because it tells a happy story and you did well using the words for the contest. You have a smooth flow of words and lines. I like how this young lady never gives up and she gets her man. Excellent story in a poem.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you. It's kind of silly I know, but I just wanted to write something fun. Thank you for reading. :)
Comment from Sugarray77
You have done an excellent job on crafting this verse... especially when you must use words that are given in the prompt. I wish you luck with this stellar poem.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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You have done an excellent job on crafting this verse... especially when you must use words that are given in the prompt. I wish you luck with this stellar poem.
Melissa
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
