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Remembering Yesterday

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A widow's journey into her relationship with her

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Comment from Sankey
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This was an interesting chapter. No spags this time around. The exchange rate between Aus and US dollars is always difficult but I am wondering if the financial sector in USA is not happy with the idea of a Biden Presidency, as our dollar has moved up some on USD. I missed the phoney money again!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the review and comments. I agree that the stock market seems pleased with Biden. They can at least knew that he is predictable. No one knows what Trump would do next. He is unstable and a little scary.
    Beth
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Beth, it's amazing of now you could sit down and remember of what your family has been doing through the years especially, when Christi decided to go to Australia.
Gert

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    Thank you Gert. That was a pretty traumatic time for me because I didn't know if she would ever want to come back. I didn't realize that Australia limits the time you can visit there unless you get married or get a work visa.
    Beth
reply by Gert sherwood on 08-Jan-2021
    You are most welcome Beth
    Gert
Comment from Jaime Deagle
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I found the character to be interesting and engaging. The story seemed natural. The character draws you into the story. Overall a well-crafted piece. It was very easy to read. It's a beautiful thing you are doing for your children. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this. I'm glad like you liked it.
    Beth
Comment from mermaids
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You have such an interesting family and I admire your daughter traveling to Australia. Your life is a constant adventure which is enjoyable to read. This is a well written story with a smooth flow of the events that take place. As usual, I am looking forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the great review. I'm pleased that you find my family interesting. I think all family are probably interesting if we just use the highlight of their life.
Comment from robyn corum
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Beth,

I am continuously amazed at how you can put all this info into your story. How on earth do you recall what happened and WHEN? I wish I had your brain! Thanks - another interesting portion.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    That you Robyn for the review. My children correct me sometimes because once in while I do get an event before or after it actually happened, and I have to go back and try to correct iit. Usually my memory is better than their memory though.
    Beth
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I like this chapter. You are fun and adventure some. The trip to Australia sounds interesting and I'm glad she made despite of the broken suitcase and missing flight.
I want to visit Australia and New Zealand, soon and hope I can do it in the next two years. The only thing I don't like is the long flight. I may to to stop in Hawaii and China.

Well done.


 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the review and comment. I would have loved to have done that as well but I'd hate the long plane ride.
    Beth
Comment from Allezw2
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Lady BETHSHELBY:
I still live in the house I bought as a single young man and to which she came later and remodeled to her content. Consequently, I feel her presence always here with wonderful memories all about. There are our daughters that wondered at me requiring their dates to come to the door and inside long enough to meet their parents before escorting them to the car. Our girls also paid, Dutch Treat, on their dates. Our independent young women are into their later years now, successful in their chosen careers. Only our son married and we have a grandson Susi would have loved. So yes a bit of nostalgia is here. Your soliloquy rings true.
Livelong and write well,
Fantasist

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm so glad you stopped by to read my story. I liked what you wrote. I looked at you portfolio and liked what I saw there as well. I will become your fan so if you post again I will be notified.
    Beth
reply by Allezw2 on 08-Jan-2021
    Lady BethShelby:
    Thank you for your expression of support. Fantasist
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    I've never been called Lady Beth before. It's a nice promotion. LOL
reply by Allezw2 on 08-Jan-2021
    No less than you deserve, no more that could I offer. Fantasist
Comment from Veronica Grace
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I like that you write this to your late husband. It seems as if your life was busy with children having their own interests and goals. I see nothing to change or correct. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate you stopping by .Beth
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Well, nothing ever slowed down in your family. Amazing that Don survived that two-story fall. Christi's new interest is taking her far afield and it sounds pretty serious. Carol's husband is interested in becoming a nurse. Connie's temporary interest in the Clarinet. And Evan still hoping to retire in the country. I'm interested as to where this all ends.

Ralf




Glen was (a)outgoing >>s/b an

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
    I appreciate the review, Ralf. Thank you for your interest in my crazy family. Something is always going on with them. Life is never boring.
    Beth
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Dating someone cuz you 'feel bad for them' is never a good idea... think Don's got the right idea of not settling in to comfortably... ;) :) :) Soooo, Glen Down Under for Christi, eh? Wow, you know, families just never seem to 'turn out' the way we forsaw them... lol!! ;) Thanx so much for letting us sit sideline to your world, Beth!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the review. As they got older they were turning out as I expected either. They all have their own personalities. They do change as they grow. I appreciate you following th story.
    Beth