Comment from Anissha Blackwell1

Excellent

BethShelby "The Twin Down Under" is a well constructed descriptive passage. It introduces each of your children, describing them in great detail, making it quite simple to follow each character. Reminiscing and talking the narrative through with your dearly beloved Evan is not only brilliant but healing to the soul.

Your expressive words are seemingly funneled from a family introduction is relatable and hilarious of your children's lives. And the end of this story and your daughters' love interest's dad in Australia wanting to check out her family was a fantastic and unexpected ending.

Anissha

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for the review and interesting comments.
I really appreciate you following my story.
Beth


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Comment from royowen

Excellent

Life here is pretty good, and from what we've seen of the western world, the Australian life style is pretty good and the country is very diverse and beautiful, you would love it, it will be interesting to find out what happens, well done, good post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021

I'm sure I'd love it. I just wish you could zap yourself there without spending 24 hours in the air. Thanks so much for the review and comment.
Beth

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Bethshelby:

I believe these writings will be a wonderful gift for your
children and their children, etc. There are so many things
I wish I knew about my grandparents that I was too young
to know to ask them while they were alive.

Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for the review and comment. I did ask my grandparents a lot about their lives when they were younger. I just wish I'd written down what they told me. My children do like my story. I hope my grandchildren will as well.
Beth

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Bad timing for the future-father-in-law to check Cristi's family that has such a busy schedule. But if the daughter is like her mom, then there is nothing for him to worry about, Glen acquired a treasure. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021

Thank you for the great review and comments. Christi was always interested in some guy. I didn't figure it would last, but it was a great opportunity for her to see a bit of the world.
Beth

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Excellent

Dear Beth, Was it not confusing for everybody in the family that both Christie and Carol had a Glen in their life? How did you manage to handle that situation?
If you have time, I would sure like to hear from you to tell me what you did.

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021

Thank you for the review and nice comments. One time all three girls had a close friend name Chis, There have more that one Scott at a time and more than one Michael. I have a Connie and two of my very close friends are named Connie. We just called them Carol's Glen and Christi's Glen.