Valediction [Cry Out!]
A song of farewell for a contest entry11 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You did very well with this challenge. I used to exchange words with a writing friend and we'd compose something. It is a rather enthusiasm-producing feat. This is well planned out.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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You did very well with this challenge. I used to exchange words with a writing friend and we'd compose something. It is a rather enthusiasm-producing feat. This is well planned out.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thanx so much for stopping in on the review for this one, Liz -- great to hear from you, my lady! ;) Take care out there and Happy 2021... ALL year long! ;) Yvette
Comment from equestrik
This is a good presentation for the writing contest. You used he required words well and I enjoyed the picture as well. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is a good presentation for the writing contest. You used he required words well and I enjoyed the picture as well. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much -- Happy New Year!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Nicely written poem. You have used the prompt words quite well. It has a Great rhyme scheme and flow. Well done. Good luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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This is a Nicely written poem. You have used the prompt words quite well. It has a Great rhyme scheme and flow. Well done. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much -- Happy New Year!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they make a perfect match.
You captured my attention form the first line to the last.
This is what I called a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they make a perfect match.
You captured my attention form the first line to the last.
This is what I called a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much -- Happy New Year!!
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our very welcome
Happy New Years to you
Cookie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much sadness in these words as life always comes to an end, but whilst we have life we should live it to the fullest and leave our mark behind, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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There is much sadness in these words as life always comes to an end, but whilst we have life we should live it to the fullest and leave our mark behind, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much -- Happy New Year!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Glorious! This may well be a winner. Stunning imagery and graceful flow--not the merest hint of the constraints of the contest--not a word is awkwardly placed!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Glorious! This may well be a winner. Stunning imagery and graceful flow--not the merest hint of the constraints of the contest--not a word is awkwardly placed!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much -- Happy New Year!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think you have a winner here my friend such a beautiful poem song that reminds me of a medieval minstrel sing at crossroads. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I think you have a winner here my friend such a beautiful poem song that reminds me of a medieval minstrel sing at crossroads. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much -- Happy New Year!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Very good work to include all the six words in your poem. Maybe I have a block; I read it a couple of times. I could not come out what message the flowers in this poem want to deliver. In the first paragraph, the flower bends... the third paragraph - what does the sunshiny flowers represent. I am bit confused.
Perhaps you can enlighten me a bit.
Thank you.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Very good work to include all the six words in your poem. Maybe I have a block; I read it a couple of times. I could not come out what message the flowers in this poem want to deliver. In the first paragraph, the flower bends... the third paragraph - what does the sunshiny flowers represent. I am bit confused.
Perhaps you can enlighten me a bit.
Thank you.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from Boogienights
A unique take on the use these words contest. Very well written, I wanted to put music to it, something lively for the chorus. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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A unique take on the use these words contest. Very well written, I wanted to put music to it, something lively for the chorus. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much -- Happy New Year!
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No mistakes. Good luck in the contest! Nice job.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No mistakes. Good luck in the contest! Nice job.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much -- Happy New Year!
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You're welcome, same to you!
