The Sudden Stop'll Getcha
Falling ain't cool10 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Not a bad attempt at imagining yourself a flying insect, scanning the ground for a flower to land on! I'll give you plenty of leeway for anthropomorphizing, considering the vocabulary you were required to use with this writing prompt. Your rhymes were creatively done and the poem is beautifully presented, with an almost dizzying aerial view! If you're not a poet, you get extra credit for trying something new.
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Not a bad attempt at imagining yourself a flying insect, scanning the ground for a flower to land on! I'll give you plenty of leeway for anthropomorphizing, considering the vocabulary you were required to use with this writing prompt. Your rhymes were creatively done and the poem is beautifully presented, with an almost dizzying aerial view! If you're not a poet, you get extra credit for trying something new.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
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Comment from Wendy G
It's fine to write just for fun (so do I, I'm not a poet either!). One should write for one's own pleasure, and if others enjoy, so much the better. I enjoyed it - and one can read deeper meanings into your work! Good wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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It's fine to write just for fun (so do I, I'm not a poet either!). One should write for one's own pleasure, and if others enjoy, so much the better. I enjoyed it - and one can read deeper meanings into your work! Good wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Sometimes when one is given a set of words to use to write
a poem, some sentences just seem to rush to one's head and
a poem is born. The picture of Will E. Coyote is the perfect
match.
Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Sometimes when one is given a set of words to use to write
a poem, some sentences just seem to rush to one's head and
a poem is born. The picture of Will E. Coyote is the perfect
match.
Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much Rdfrdmom2. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem should be considered as the winner. Very creative and the image of the coyote is awesome. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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I think that this poem should be considered as the winner. Very creative and the image of the coyote is awesome. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great way to use all those words, and the picture is a perfect illustration. A fear of heights is probably based on imagining what would happen if you fell. Hope your poem does well in the contest.
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Great way to use all those words, and the picture is a perfect illustration. A fear of heights is probably based on imagining what would happen if you fell. Hope your poem does well in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
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You are welcome
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I know failing it's no cool, but I do appreciate the humor and the musicality of your rhymes. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.ð???
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I know failing it's no cool, but I do appreciate the humor and the musicality of your rhymes. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.ð???
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from prophetess
I like the format u used and ur poem flows nicely. It conjures up a hilarious visual for this reader. ð???
U did good using all the words and rhyming them... Well done.
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I like the format u used and ur poem flows nicely. It conjures up a hilarious visual for this reader. ð???
U did good using all the words and rhyming them... Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
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Can you clarify why I received three stars?
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Wow... I like the poem. Each line is bold and delivers an emotion.
Although flying up in the air is scary but you are not afraid saying: "I'm no sissy I won't cry, I'll just splat and die."
Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Wow... I like the poem. Each line is bold and delivers an emotion.
Although flying up in the air is scary but you are not afraid saying: "I'm no sissy I won't cry, I'll just splat and die."
Good job.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is a fun poem. I love the coyote and roadrunner. They don't make cartoons like that anymore. Great job of using the assigned words. Hope you do well in the contest.
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This is a fun poem. I love the coyote and roadrunner. They don't make cartoons like that anymore. Great job of using the assigned words. Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from Gloria ....
Haa, you brought a big smile to my face with this fine poem, author. Metre is not a requirement, and just the sheer joy of going on this magical mystery flight makes this a fine entry into this contest. All the required words in their places.
Wishing you great luck in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Haa, you brought a big smile to my face with this fine poem, author. Metre is not a requirement, and just the sheer joy of going on this magical mystery flight makes this a fine entry into this contest. All the required words in their places.
Wishing you great luck in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much Gloria. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
