Final Flower
a poem8 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a good and powerful write for the contest. You included a lot using all the required words and stating a powerful message and unfortunate truth about humanity.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is a good and powerful write for the contest. You included a lot using all the required words and stating a powerful message and unfortunate truth about humanity.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you, equestrik.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This open uses the six words and is good for the contest. Maybe I am stupid. I read this many times but could not figure out what message the poem delivers.
Are we waiting for "Peace."?
The picture is good.
Good work.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This open uses the six words and is good for the contest. Maybe I am stupid. I read this many times but could not figure out what message the poem delivers.
Are we waiting for "Peace."?
The picture is good.
Good work.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Chan
Comment from QC Poet
Very Good story telling arrangement of the words listed. Good Luck in the Use These Words Contest. Great Photo Combo, I like the flowers vs the gun mediphorical aspect also. Great Job
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Very Good story telling arrangement of the words listed. Good Luck in the Use These Words Contest. Great Photo Combo, I like the flowers vs the gun mediphorical aspect also. Great Job
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thanks, QC
Comment from Earl Corp
Very good use of the words outlined in the prompt. Interesting picture you chose to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Very good use of the words outlined in the prompt. Interesting picture you chose to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from Melodie Michelle
I think you did a good job considering the worded you had to work with;-)
I appreciate you sharing this poem for the writing prompt!
May God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I think you did a good job considering the worded you had to work with;-)
I appreciate you sharing this poem for the writing prompt!
May God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Melodie
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Smartie,
*smile* Aren't you clever! It only took you four lines to do what I've seen many others trying to do with MUCH more. AND without having nearly as nice or original message as you've provided. I enjoyed! Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Dear Mystery Smartie,
*smile* Aren't you clever! It only took you four lines to do what I've seen many others trying to do with MUCH more. AND without having nearly as nice or original message as you've provided. I enjoyed! Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Robyn.
Comment from Alli Johnston
I would love to know what you were thinking while writing this poem. To me, I imagine someone preparing a bouquet for a bride he secretly loves, heart breaking as he is doing so. Fantastic use of the words required, best of luck!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I would love to know what you were thinking while writing this poem. To me, I imagine someone preparing a bouquet for a bride he secretly loves, heart breaking as he is doing so. Fantastic use of the words required, best of luck!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Alli
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a terrific entry into this contest. Every one that I have reviewed so far are very different from each other, and yours is no exception.
Great juxtaposing of opposites which is a fine literary device and sometimes just the thing.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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This is a terrific entry into this contest. Every one that I have reviewed so far are very different from each other, and yours is no exception.
Great juxtaposing of opposites which is a fine literary device and sometimes just the thing.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Gloria
