Comment from lancellot

Excellent

You should have met my mother. She had no problem saying no, and my grandmother would say some things I can't write on Fanstory without a warning label.

Very interesting piece. You did a good job showing the hectic things this woman put herself through.

Nice entry. Good Luck.

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and comment on my story. I for one am one of those people who find myself stretched and stretched.I then hate myself and promise to do better. I am pleased that you enjoyed. Smiles to you.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

A great story to fit the requirements for this contest. A good point about mothers, they always want to come to the rescue and make everything right but this one sure ended up wrong.

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and comment on my story. I for one am one of those people who find myself stretched and stretched. I am pleased that you enjoyed. Smiles to you.

reply by Anne Johnston on 06-Jan-2021

You are welcome