A New Day Will Dawn
Despite the pandemic...26 total reviews
Comment from T.E. Loper
It's funny: when I saw the associated picture, I thought the poem might be about getting stuck on an exact change highway. Maybe in some sense, it is!
These are nicely formed quatrains, using an xaxa scheme, with no enjambment. The fourth stanza is especially strong, and I love the alliteration; very lyrical.
Good luck with this well-written poem!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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It's funny: when I saw the associated picture, I thought the poem might be about getting stuck on an exact change highway. Maybe in some sense, it is!
These are nicely formed quatrains, using an xaxa scheme, with no enjambment. The fourth stanza is especially strong, and I love the alliteration; very lyrical.
Good luck with this well-written poem!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you. We don't have toll roads around where I live so that wouldn't have occurred to me. Thank you so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Despite the pandemic...
A New Day Will Dawn
by Boogienights
Hello, my friend,
I agree with you... there's hope in the horizon. Trump loss, Democrats have the three branches of government, and we have a vaccine...or several ones.
Great entry for the make a poem using these words writing prompt.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Despite the pandemic...
A New Day Will Dawn
by Boogienights
Hello, my friend,
I agree with you... there's hope in the horizon. Trump loss, Democrats have the three branches of government, and we have a vaccine...or several ones.
Great entry for the make a poem using these words writing prompt.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your positive review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
I also feel this new hope that you speak of! What a wonderful entry for the use these words contest! And so skillfully written as well. You have a wonderful rhyme scheme and the flow is magnificent! Well done Boogie!
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I also feel this new hope that you speak of! What a wonderful entry for the use these words contest! And so skillfully written as well. You have a wonderful rhyme scheme and the flow is magnificent! Well done Boogie!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you once again for this fantastic review. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This Is a Beautifully written poem using the suggested words. A new day is dawning hope remains high Wendy be down but we'll never be out. Well come through this much stronger than before, life always goes on, of that there's no doubt. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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This Is a Beautifully written poem using the suggested words. A new day is dawning hope remains high Wendy be down but we'll never be out. Well come through this much stronger than before, life always goes on, of that there's no doubt. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A beautifully written piece ruing the past and looking to the future with hope. Yes. We can. We can change the future for the better by changing our lifestyle and our attitude! Thanks for sharing. Good luck I the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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A beautifully written piece ruing the past and looking to the future with hope. Yes. We can. We can change the future for the better by changing our lifestyle and our attitude! Thanks for sharing. Good luck I the contest!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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You are right about that, I think it starts with respecting each other. Thanks so much for reading. :)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'A New Day Will Dawn", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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'A New Day Will Dawn", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you for saying such nice things...I really appreciate it. :)
Boogienights,
You're very welcome.
Take care and stay safe,
the Duchess
Comment from patcelaw
I wish you the best in the contest with this well written poem. I find that wearing a mask to be anything but peaceful.
Patricia
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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I wish you the best in the contest with this well written poem. I find that wearing a mask to be anything but peaceful.
Patricia
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from karenina
This reads smoothly, nice rhyme and meter. I would have never guessed you were mandated to include the six words in the prompt. Mostly I like that despite it all you maintain optimism. We all need that.--Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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This reads smoothly, nice rhyme and meter. I would have never guessed you were mandated to include the six words in the prompt. Mostly I like that despite it all you maintain optimism. We all need that.--Karenina
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much for reading my poem and for your kind words. :)
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You are most welcome!--Karenina
Comment from Sugarray77
Well said, Sharon!! Your wonderful poem perfectly fills the bill for this prompt and is so very meaningful with the theme you chose to share. I like the message of hope that is interwoven throughout it. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Well said, Sharon!! Your wonderful poem perfectly fills the bill for this prompt and is so very meaningful with the theme you chose to share. I like the message of hope that is interwoven throughout it. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you, it's so nice of you to read and review my poem. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
A very up-beat poem about our situation. You have made good use of the words that were provided and your rhyming is very good. I like the feeling of optimism in the last verse. Things will never be the same as they were, but we will have a new normal.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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A very up-beat poem about our situation. You have made good use of the words that were provided and your rhyming is very good. I like the feeling of optimism in the last verse. Things will never be the same as they were, but we will have a new normal.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I'm excited about the future, we should all be. Thanks again for reading. :)
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You are welcome
