A New Day Will Dawn
Despite the pandemic...26 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You have met the challenge of this contest using the words provided well in this very upbeat and informative poem.
"A new day is dawning, hope remains high,
we may be down, but we'll never be out.
We'll come through this much stronger than before,
life always goes on, of that there's no doubt."
Note: I have changed 'then' to 'than'
Ralf
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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You have met the challenge of this contest using the words provided well in this very upbeat and informative poem.
"A new day is dawning, hope remains high,
we may be down, but we'll never be out.
We'll come through this much stronger than before,
life always goes on, of that there's no doubt."
Note: I have changed 'then' to 'than'
Ralf
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this fine review, it's always great to from you. :)
Comment from greyson ernst
thank you for entering my contest you won my vote and nice picture perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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thank you for entering my contest you won my vote and nice picture perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you for creating it. Are you going to enter? I enjoy reading your work. Thanks again for this nice review. :))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A positive and uplifting poem and now we are in a new year we can hope that things will change. It has started off in lockdown in England and I am hoping once the vaccine is rolled-out people will stay well again. Hopes are high and your poem confirmed this here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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A positive and uplifting poem and now we are in a new year we can hope that things will change. It has started off in lockdown in England and I am hoping once the vaccine is rolled-out people will stay well again. Hopes are high and your poem confirmed this here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and for your insightful comments. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This is what I am taking from your poem , hope and peace. As long as we stay on the path we will be fine: "A new day is dawning, hope remains high,
we may be down, but we'll never be out.
We'll come through this much stronger then before,
life always goes on, of that there's no doubt." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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This is what I am taking from your poem , hope and peace. As long as we stay on the path we will be fine: "A new day is dawning, hope remains high,
we may be down, but we'll never be out.
We'll come through this much stronger then before,
life always goes on, of that there's no doubt." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem . :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Anew. Day has dawned let's hope things become better for one and all. It is heart breaking so many has had to die of the virus called COVID-19.
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Anew. Day has dawned let's hope things become better for one and all. It is heart breaking so many has had to die of the virus called COVID-19.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for this nice review. :)
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Smiles and the whole world smiles.
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Smiles and the whole world smiles.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hey, Boggienights,
I like your free verse form. I also appreciate your eclipsed, scars and interjected faith and hope.
It has realism and acceptance as well as
hope for our future.
Tempting is missing the t.
Please adjust.
Anna
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hey, Boggienights,
I like your free verse form. I also appreciate your eclipsed, scars and interjected faith and hope.
It has realism and acceptance as well as
hope for our future.
Tempting is missing the t.
Please adjust.
Anna
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you for pointing out my error and for this positive review. :)
