What Should We Do?
A dog and donkey don't know how to solve this problem.3 total reviews
Comment from DSchlosser
This one's a pretty good poem. I can picture both the donkey and dachshund asking each other for advice and only waiting for their human to come out and rescue them both. Then they both whine when a human walks by if they don't notice.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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This one's a pretty good poem. I can picture both the donkey and dachshund asking each other for advice and only waiting for their human to come out and rescue them both. Then they both whine when a human walks by if they don't notice.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a cute poem, and it goes well with the picture. Your 5-7-5 syllable counts are correct, and your poem made me chuckle. You might choose a question mark after "What should the dog do?" in line 2. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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This is a cute poem, and it goes well with the picture. Your 5-7-5 syllable counts are correct, and your poem made me chuckle. You might choose a question mark after "What should the dog do?" in line 2. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thanks! I hope I win.
Comment from papa55mike
It's amazing the reactions dogs have with other animals. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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It's amazing the reactions dogs have with other animals. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thanks! I hope I win.
