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Pants

a 5-7-5

16 total reviews 
Comment from sunnilicious
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That terrible, but I'm laughing. Well thought out. Clearly written. Good artwork choice. You met the syllable count requirements. Good P and F alliterations going on. Best of luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thanks, sunnilicious, for giving this a look.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a Well written 5-7-5 lol. the politician forgot to pull up His pants full disclosure.youve chosen Quite an Amusing photo ð???good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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    Thanks, Joanne
Comment from kmoss
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HahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaHahahahahahaHahahahaha. If only this were true. Nice one!! You completed the rash at hand. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahashahahahahahahaha

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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    Thanks, kmoss
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written humorous 5-7-5 poem about the pants of a politician that falls down when he doesn't expect it to happen and become fully exposed.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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    Thanks, Sandra
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I found this poem extremely amusing. It made me laugh out loud. I especially liked the play on words of "full disclosure". I wished I had more six stars left... but life is hard. You will have to imagine.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Katherine
Comment from DSchlosser
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Looks like the picture got a bit blurry for this entry. I like the humor to this poem though. Especially with current politics. The media would go gaga for some breezy news such as this. Great job!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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    Thanks, DS
Comment from Raul1
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This is very funny and hilarious. It made me laugh of the man with his pants down. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    Thanks, Raul
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I got a good laugh after reading this. I like the way you put a different spin on the phrase "full disclosure." I can just see men bumbling around in front of a crowd trying to pull up there pants.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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    Thank you, Mia
Comment from equestrik
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Well! This is funny. From the picture to your write it just had me grinning. Well presented for the humorous writing prompt. It would only be improved if the picture were more clear.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    Thank you, equestrik
Comment from Roberta Liszcz
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LOL. You definitely made me laugh. Very well done. Very timely. If only we did get more full disclosure from our politicians and leaders. Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Roberta, for giving this a look.
reply by Roberta Liszcz on 12-Jan-2021