Pants
a 5-7-516 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
This made me laugh! We seem to have a number of politicians these days that need to put on their "big boy pants" and do the business of running our nation. A timely and humorous 5-7-5 poem. Good luck in the contest.
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This made me laugh! We seem to have a number of politicians these days that need to put on their "big boy pants" and do the business of running our nation. A timely and humorous 5-7-5 poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks, Carol
Comment from David Newkirk
Ok, this made me chuckle. You set up your punchline nicely, which isnt easy in a 5-7-5. All of your word choices are good, so I don't have any suggestions - just well done. Five stars, nice job.
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Ok, this made me chuckle. You set up your punchline nicely, which isnt easy in a 5-7-5. All of your word choices are good, so I don't have any suggestions - just well done. Five stars, nice job.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
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Thanks, David
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your metaphoric presentation is a hoot! LOL. There are many meanings to be gleaned by this. You do set our imaginations a whirr. So many things come to mind with your words.
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Your metaphoric presentation is a hoot! LOL. There are many meanings to be gleaned by this. You do set our imaginations a whirr. So many things come to mind with your words.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Ralf
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This humorous 5/7/5 speaks the general view about politicians of today around the world, more or less, they assume to play all open, nothing hidden; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This humorous 5/7/5 speaks the general view about politicians of today around the world, more or less, they assume to play all open, nothing hidden; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from papa55mike
I've read several of these entries but I really like this one. What a wonderfully written and funny poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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I've read several of these entries but I really like this one. What a wonderfully written and funny poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Mike
Comment from muffinmama
This is so hilarious that I actually laughed out loud, not just smiled.
No one should ever take themselves too seriously.
I hope I find out eventually who you are because I'd like to follow you.
Thanks for my laugh of the day!
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This is so hilarious that I actually laughed out loud, not just smiled.
No one should ever take themselves too seriously.
I hope I find out eventually who you are because I'd like to follow you.
Thanks for my laugh of the day!
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thanks, MM.
