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R.I.P. Grandpapa: Toes Firth

Funny poem

4 total reviews 
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a cute and humorous post which appears to meet all the contest requirements. I especially liked the writing on the gravestone. Some of the other phrases were lost on me.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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It meets the requirement of "Here lieth ..."

I like this line: "We won't forget his silly legacy..." We all love our grandpa. Whatever legacy won't change our love for our grandpa.

Good luck to your contest.


 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    Thank you! I hope I win.
Comment from rspoet
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That's a great looking tombstone with a humorous epitaph
some people will do anything for a laugh.
Poor old grandpappy just wasn't computer literate,
coulda just forwarded it with no problem.
Now he lies toes firth.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    Thank you! I hope to win.
Comment from Mia Twysted
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The piece played around with the tongue as you read it aloud. It gave a giggle for the words used allowing there to be a playfulness in the poem so you are left sorry for the loss but happy for the experience of knowing them.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you!