Instead of Fear
A Kyrielle for the Repeating Line Contest3 total reviews
Comment from Paul Borders
Instead of fear, my choice was clear.... to vote for your submission. My vote placed your entry into a first place tie. I hope it receives more votes.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Instead of fear, my choice was clear.... to vote for your submission. My vote placed your entry into a first place tie. I hope it receives more votes.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the contest
with a very good repeating line and important message
in these troubled times.
The rhymes are nicely done and meter reads perfectly.
Nature offers peace and beauty as does family,
and fear will fade in time.
Well done.
Best wishes to you and family.
Robert
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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You've written an excellent poem for the contest
with a very good repeating line and important message
in these troubled times.
The rhymes are nicely done and meter reads perfectly.
Nature offers peace and beauty as does family,
and fear will fade in time.
Well done.
Best wishes to you and family.
Robert
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this- always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have written a good poem for this contest. Beautiful picture of your orchids. I like your message about all the good things there are to think about, rather than focusing on fear.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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You have written a good poem for this contest. Beautiful picture of your orchids. I like your message about all the good things there are to think about, rather than focusing on fear.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece!
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You are welcome
