Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written repeating line poem about the thought of the human race that will become to total agreement that we shoupdate not hate but love each other.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021

Very well said, thank you for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Eddy Fidelis

Excellent

Great job!

I enjoy reading your poem, so natural and Captivating.
The fourth stanza does not seem to flow well; happiness and loving others. I believe love can still exist in the midst of sadness but it will grant comfort or solace.
All others stanzas are superb. Best of luck

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021

Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem, it's much appreciated. :)

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

You give us many good points about love and happiness. We all need a new start from our disasterous president trump. Love will prevail and our country will heal. Nice poem with repeats. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you for this great review, although I do disagree with you about our current president. Thanks again for reading. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

You are absolutely right in your thoughts. It is important to see that beneath the exterior we are all human, and enjoy the same experiences of nature and relationships - and hopes for peace, unity and love for one another. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you so much, I'm glad we agree....now we have to get the rest of the country and world on board. :)>

Comment from equestrik

Exceptional

I definitely agree and love that you wrote this wonderful and positive poem. This should remind us all of how much we can agree on and if we can do this, there must be so much more. Good and creative write.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you for this wonderful review and the 6 stars, it makes my night. :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello anonymous

--Great entry for the Repeating line poem. writing prompt contest. It was a pleasure reading your Quatern poem. Good form. I like the presentation too.

--Lovely imagery and sentiment...we need to heal our country and unite for peace.

--Nice repeating refrain...

Can all of us agree right now,

Well done. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

Can we agree now that this is a FIVE rating?

I totally agree : "Can all of us agree right now,
that happiness starts from within? In order to love others, first
a love for yourself must begin."

Happy Writing!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you, I definitely wouldn't disagree about 5 stars...lol. Thanks so much for this great review. :)

Comment from Alli Johnston

Excellent

We may all be able to agree on this but only a few will make the effort. Maybe if people like you continue to speak out and try to bring people together, You can make a difference. Keep doing your part, you're doing a wonderful job

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you, that means a lot to me. :)

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

Yes! I think we can all agree! This is a wonderful contest entry! I really think this will do so well in the contest. What a beautiful peice and such a lovely message. Well done friend

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thank you for this wonderful review, I'm so excited. :)

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

I know that I can agree with what you wrote here! Reading your poem made me long for spring and the chance for renewal. I truly hope that one day we can all agree to disagree and start living together in harmony! Excellent poem!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thank you for this fantastic review..it made my day. :)