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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Fergus"A collection of stories: Some True, some not
27 total reviews
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello JLR,
It's a nice Epitaph related to pet dog - Fergus, meeting the desired norms, having humorous and poetic touches from the beginning to the bottom, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the theme.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Hello JLR,
It's a nice Epitaph related to pet dog - Fergus, meeting the desired norms, having humorous and poetic touches from the beginning to the bottom, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the theme.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from DonandVicki
You chose the perfect image to accompany your poetic epitaph. The image drew me in and your humor was the crowning glory to this poem. I enjoyed the humor. Don
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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You chose the perfect image to accompany your poetic epitaph. The image drew me in and your humor was the crowning glory to this poem. I enjoyed the humor. Don
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thanks Don!
Comment from Jenny Kartchner
What a cool way to do an epitaph, with your dog. I like your rhyming pattern. I like the word gumption, too. Your ending is nice, "man we had fun'. Keep it up
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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What a cool way to do an epitaph, with your dog. I like your rhyming pattern. I like the word gumption, too. Your ending is nice, "man we had fun'. Keep it up
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Jenny, thanks..
Comment from LJbutterfly
If that is an actual picture of Fergus, he looks like a lot of fun. He looks like he is ready for whatever activity you put in front of him. If your story is true, I am sorry for your loss, but you've written a beautiful and creative tribute. Fergus, you're remembered. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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If that is an actual picture of Fergus, he looks like a lot of fun. He looks like he is ready for whatever activity you put in front of him. If your story is true, I am sorry for your loss, but you've written a beautiful and creative tribute. Fergus, you're remembered. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Lorraine, thanks for your review.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
It sounds like a hunting dog who couldn't get used to the gun shoots. I don't have a dog or cat but I can see he is a fun dog to have.
You need to change this to Poetry from a humorous fiction.
Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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It sounds like a hunting dog who couldn't get used to the gun shoots. I don't have a dog or cat but I can see he is a fun dog to have.
You need to change this to Poetry from a humorous fiction.
Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review Lisa.
Comment from Bill Schott
This epitaph for Fergus captures a cute pup with a good sense of fashion. Unlike us, Fergus and other like him will run their race before us.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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This epitaph for Fergus captures a cute pup with a good sense of fashion. Unlike us, Fergus and other like him will run their race before us.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Oh Fergus looks so cute with those big puppy dog eyes. I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. You words are descriptive and tell of the love you had for Fergus.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Oh Fergus looks so cute with those big puppy dog eyes. I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. You words are descriptive and tell of the love you had for Fergus.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Smiles back to you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Good entry for the
Epitaph writing prompt contest. Nice Epitaph poetic form.
Love the dog picture.. well done.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Hello anonymous
Good entry for the
Epitaph writing prompt contest. Nice Epitaph poetic form.
Love the dog picture.. well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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thanks
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Poor Fergus. I love his buggy eyes. I would run, too, if
I heard the crack of a gun. I can only imagine that you
and ole Fergus had fun together. Good luck in the
epithet contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Poor Fergus. I love his buggy eyes. I would run, too, if
I heard the crack of a gun. I can only imagine that you
and ole Fergus had fun together. Good luck in the
epithet contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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thank you!
Comment from BethShelby
Are you sure he isn;'t in congress. I thought I saw him on TV the other day. He has a rather grim expression but he does look as though he would fear anything. THe epitaph is well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Are you sure he isn;'t in congress. I thought I saw him on TV the other day. He has a rather grim expression but he does look as though he would fear anything. THe epitaph is well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Smiling back Beth.
