Magic moments
Free verse29 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem paints a vivid scene--taking a lovely, peaceful walk on the beach until--Boom! and Ouch! Injury due to some careless jerk who wouldn't use the garbage can!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Your ultra-concise poem paints a vivid scene--taking a lovely, peaceful walk on the beach until--Boom! and Ouch! Injury due to some careless jerk who wouldn't use the garbage can!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for the insightful remarks.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Magic moments
by Sanku
Hello, Sanku,
Excellent entry for the Free Verse Poetry Contest. I love your good humor at the end. The imagery is lovely.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Magic moments
by Sanku
Hello, Sanku,
Excellent entry for the Free Verse Poetry Contest. I love your good humor at the end. The imagery is lovely.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from MissMerri
Yep... that will do it! Wow What a sudden change from the peaceful beautiful ocean to hazards on the shore. That would be awful! Good writing and a very good lesson for everyone. MM
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Yep... that will do it! Wow What a sudden change from the peaceful beautiful ocean to hazards on the shore. That would be awful! Good writing and a very good lesson for everyone. MM
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Julie Sandy
I was enjoying the lovely scene you set until the end, but I realise that is the whole point in the poem to highlight the beauty and also the waste us as humans have created.
Very strong message
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I was enjoying the lovely scene you set until the end, but I realise that is the whole point in the poem to highlight the beauty and also the waste us as humans have created.
Very strong message
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much.Thank you for getting that message accurate.
Comment from Keva Evans
Great descriptive words. More particularly so the "softly sighing waves" "Nascent rays of sun"
And i love the turn at the end of the poem. Its as if the reader himself is also jolted form the dream.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Great descriptive words. More particularly so the "softly sighing waves" "Nascent rays of sun"
And i love the turn at the end of the poem. Its as if the reader himself is also jolted form the dream.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much .
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Nicely written free verse poem. I love beaches also unfortunately broken bottles sometimes get washed in with the tide. Very beautiful photo of the beach and ocean. Nicely done.
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This is a Nicely written free verse poem. I love beaches also unfortunately broken bottles sometimes get washed in with the tide. Very beautiful photo of the beach and ocean. Nicely done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive, and creative. I thought
about magic moments and how uplifting they can be. Sorry you stumbled
on the bottle. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
perfect and compliments the words of this poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive, and creative. I thought
about magic moments and how uplifting they can be. Sorry you stumbled
on the bottle. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
perfect and compliments the words of this poem.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Ann Market
Firstly, the imagery in this poem is vivid and amazing; I enjoyed it very much! The form was easy and fun to read, too.
Secondly, ouch! You poor thing! That sounds terribly annoying, to say the least!
Thanks for sharing this piece, and good luck to you in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Firstly, the imagery in this poem is vivid and amazing; I enjoyed it very much! The form was easy and fun to read, too.
Secondly, ouch! You poor thing! That sounds terribly annoying, to say the least!
Thanks for sharing this piece, and good luck to you in the contest! :)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
That would certainly break your magic moment. I resonate with your first stanza because it is also my dream moment. Whenever I was in Florida, I made a point of walking the beach, predawn. The loveliest time.
Ralf
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That would certainly break your magic moment. I resonate with your first stanza because it is also my dream moment. Whenever I was in Florida, I made a point of walking the beach, predawn. The loveliest time.
Ralf
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Aw, what a sad ending to a beautiful interlude. This part was really beautiful..
the nascent rays of sun
and the whispering winds
dusting the cobwebs away
But the ending made it memorable!
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Aw, what a sad ending to a beautiful interlude. This part was really beautiful..
the nascent rays of sun
and the whispering winds
dusting the cobwebs away
But the ending made it memorable!
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much .
