Comment from Aaqib Naeem

Excellent

Hahaha! Man this one is refreshing! Global boring!!! :-D :-D

It was soooo serious the whole way and the build was supreme as well. A really nice conclusion to this story I must say.

Recommendation: happen, like too, so many others had...I think this line here can be phrased better. The 'like too' part.

Best wishes for the contest and have a good day :-)

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021

Thank you for the great review, Aaqib. I changed the 'like too' to 'that too.' Yeah, the like too wasn't quite getting it. Thanks for the suggestion. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. Have a good one.

Ron

reply by Aaqib Naeem on 22-Jan-2021

Glad to be of help. You are most welcome :-)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh dear, it seems that you have been bored of late by some posts here, you made me smile and I wondered what the conclusion would be here and you didn't disappoint, ha ha ha, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021

Thank you, Dolly. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful weekend.

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Ron

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 22-Jan-2021

You too Ron x