Comment from --Turtle.

Excellent

Hey, Craig,

I got to read this poem too, a little late, but I enjoyed.

A potent sentiment expressed in a lead by example tone.

A lot of people have a 'I want what you have' sort of drive. I see it in kids at a young age, where they initially squabble over the same toy, not because it's the best toy, but because one kid wanted to play with it, and that ups the appeal of the toy. The 'I want what you have' Envy.

Often times, I try to drive home the gratitude for what we have over thinking too much about what others have. My daughter doesn't always get it, understanding that if you appreciate what you have, then it doesn't matter what everyone else has.

Strong presentation, adds a nostalgic warmth to wise words.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021

I'm sure she'll get the idea, seems to me she has a good teacher.Thanks for the kind words, Turtle. As always, much appreciated. Craig

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Congrats on your recognitions for this thought-provoking four-liner on the theme of envy for what you don't have vs gratitude for what you do. Well done. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021

Thanks for the kind comments, Liz. Very much appreciated :) Craig

Comment from MissMerri

Exceptional

Me too! What a neat poem you have composed here my friend. I happen to believe gratitude is something we could use a lot more of these days and I like that you are practicing this positive philosophy. Congratulations on having your poem recognized in this contest. I liked it a lot. I might have missed it altogether had it not won a prize... so I am grateful too.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021

Thank you very much for the lovely glowing stars and the kind words, MM. They are very much appreciated, and it's lovely to see your name in among the reviews :)

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Oh, Craig this is very good. Your use of the intro artwork sets the stage and softens our hearts to accept your words. Well done ... it is a lovely verse!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thanks for the very kind words, Melissa. Lovely to hear from you. Cheers, Craig

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

OH, how very true and yet so very hard for some to see!! ;) An awesome offering the contest, Craig -- and I think Pooh and Piglet are a perfect choice for your profundity! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thanks so much for the wonderful comments and good luck wishes, Yvette. Both are most gratefully received. Cheers, Craig

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a Very nicely written poem. I love the photo with the inspirational
Quote from piglet. I'm
Grateful each day for what I have. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks for the good wishes and kind comments. Craig

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Craig.
-Hope you are doing well.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I agree with you about
envy and peace, and you
have a very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
-I like your profile picture, too!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks for the kind words and good wishes, Pam. The photo, I'm afraid, is, like its owner, getting a bit long in the tooth. It was taken probably 6-8 years ago. Cheers, Craig

reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Jan-2021

You are very welcome, Craig, and thanks for sharing your reply.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written four line poem about finding peace and forget about envy against others. Be grateful to God for whatever we have each day.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks very much, Sandra. Most appreciated. Craig

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This four-line poem, Gratitude, has the proper formatting and captures that sense of thankfulness for what God has seen fit to bestow.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks, Bill.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Craig, It is so nice to see you posting a poem again. This is a very lovely Four Line poem you have penned for the contest. I am with you in that I am grateful for what I have also. May God bless you my friend. Teri

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, Teri, for the lovely comments. It's great to hear from you again. Hope you are well. keep safe! Craig