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Treasures of the Black Hills

A Kyrielle for the contest

7 total reviews 
Comment from equestrik
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I appreciate this write as a tribute to the mustangs. Humans coud do a much better and more creative job in caring for these horses. humans ae also one of their predators.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share you insghts. I am glad you enjoyed this piece and appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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OH my goodness, what a lovely romantic feel you've given them! ;) A great kyrielle for the contest today as there are so many of different flavors -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share you insghts. I am glad you enjoyed this piece and appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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I like the phrase; "as long as mustangs still run free." It symbolizes "the dream of freedom."

Can American offer what the poem says: "gold (economy growth)... Their royal bloodline ( no racism)... honor and respect..."?

Good luck to your contest.


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for dropping by to share your insightful comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a pleasing Kyrielle about these majestic horses running free and enjoying life. I could hear these mustangs jumping about and enjoying life, much enjoyed,l love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for dropping by to share your insightful comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sharon Nolen
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Very good. You met the requirements of 8 syllables per line. You used the same last line in each stanza. I liked the way you rhymed it on every other line. And most of all, the poem made sense. It was an easy read.

Thanks for sharing such a good work.


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for dropping by to share your insightful comments. Much appreciated.
reply by Sharon Nolen on 28-Jan-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
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Such a cool poem. I love to see the wild horses roaming freely. It's a shame the BLM rounds them up and causes them so much stress. Good luck in the Kyrielle writing prompt.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. I loved reading and reviewing it. Your picture is perfect for your well-thought out words. Your rhymes work great to help move your story along with good details. Your repeating line fits in seamlessly in all verses. Your kyrielle is a great historical poem about the mustangs and their descendants.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
    Glad this piece resonated with you. They are beautiful animals that need to be protected. Thank you for reading and reviewing!