Within The Art
Kyrielle contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
This is very nice, author. :) I read what I could about the Kyrielle, but it looks like you have shown me the way to a better way to write it. Instead of the repeating line to be in the same position, it could go wherever but in each stanza. thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This is very nice, author. :) I read what I could about the Kyrielle, but it looks like you have shown me the way to a better way to write it. Instead of the repeating line to be in the same position, it could go wherever but in each stanza. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, PW. That's what I usually do for these Kyrielles, just drop the line down one each stanza. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Something many live each day without others knowing... but, then again, it wouldn't be masquerade if they knew! :) ;) A great kyrielle for the contest today as there are so many of different flavors -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Something many live each day without others knowing... but, then again, it wouldn't be masquerade if they knew! :) ;) A great kyrielle for the contest today as there are so many of different flavors -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Yvette. Yes, there are a lot of flavors out there this go 'round. I appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a beautifully written poem. It takes real skill to write a kyrielle that flows so nicely, and I love the subject matter and the fact that you never know where you'll end up once you start to write.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This is a beautifully written poem. It takes real skill to write a kyrielle that flows so nicely, and I love the subject matter and the fact that you never know where you'll end up once you start to write.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Susan. I really appreciate the gracious stars. Yes, I'm a stickler for flow in a lot of my stuff. Lol. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Comment from equestrik
This is a truly alluring presentation. I love the picture and the writing is truly mesmerizing. I am wishing all the best to you in the upcoming writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This is a truly alluring presentation. I love the picture and the writing is truly mesmerizing. I am wishing all the best to you in the upcoming writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Equestrik. When I came across this picture I just had to use it. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, kind comments and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my little offering. I hope you have a wonderful day and thank you again.
