A Flowing Stream
A Tyburn using a metaphor.5 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I'm sorry to have missed this. For some reason it didn't come across my alerts. A beautiful offering that grows with the stream. Your chosen art crowns your fine work so nicely. Simply beautiful, Faue dear.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....xo....
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I'm sorry to have missed this. For some reason it didn't come across my alerts. A beautiful offering that grows with the stream. Your chosen art crowns your fine work so nicely. Simply beautiful, Faue dear.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....xo....
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you ever so much for your review. Your comments are truly appreciated.
Blessings,
Faye
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I love people who recognize literary techniques. Not only are you using metaphors, you are able to identify them. I like your alliteration. Your first four lines create the sensation of crescendo. Well done. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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I love people who recognize literary techniques. Not only are you using metaphors, you are able to identify them. I like your alliteration. Your first four lines create the sensation of crescendo. Well done. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you ever so much for your review and comments. I truly appreciate your vote.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Good use of font difference to add some depth to your offering... :) :) A great Tyburn for the contest here, mystery author - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls!! :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Good use of font difference to add some depth to your offering... :) :) A great Tyburn for the contest here, mystery author - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls!! :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you ever so much for your review. I appreciate the comments and the best of luck wish.
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have entered a very good poem for this contest. I looked at the rules for it, and thought it would be hard to do, but you have mastered it. Hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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You have entered a very good poem for this contest. I looked at the rules for it, and thought it would be hard to do, but you have mastered it. Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful remarks and wishes.
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You are welcome
Comment from donette1914
simply stunning
I like the way you write and it draws ones in and you make this come to life
simply outstanding!
well chosen words to compliment your work
very believable and thought out
thank you for sharing. I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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simply stunning
I like the way you write and it draws ones in and you make this come to life
simply outstanding!
well chosen words to compliment your work
very believable and thought out
thank you for sharing. I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you ever so much for your encouraging review. It is truly appreciated.
