Spring Fever
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Anticipating Spring! writing prompt contest.
Beautiful presentation and imagery. Well chosen words to express the emotions of anticipation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Anticipating Spring! writing prompt contest.
Beautiful presentation and imagery. Well chosen words to express the emotions of anticipation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem! Omg, you have made yearn for spring so badly. I just can't wait! You have captured the beauty and wonder of watching winter melt into spring!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem! Omg, you have made yearn for spring so badly. I just can't wait! You have captured the beauty and wonder of watching winter melt into spring!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this great review! :)
Comment from zanya
These stanzas, especially the final one, simply renew and invigorate the reader, serving as a reminder of the delights of Spring about to burst forth - Spring spreads its colorful tapestry
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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These stanzas, especially the final one, simply renew and invigorate the reader, serving as a reminder of the delights of Spring about to burst forth - Spring spreads its colorful tapestry
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, so glad to hear from you.:)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
You have encapsulated my feeling regarding the approach of spring as well! Delightful imagery with rhythmical lines that flow well.
A few edits to consider:
1. But I know it's there, so brimming with fish, (;)
I am called by my friends, "fishing king". ("Fishing King.")
2. Soon, flowers burst forth with colors so bright,
the trees dress in their gown's (gowns) of green
The water and sky sport lovely blue shades, (;)
birds return with their songs so serene.
3. I know that spring's not too far behind,
is that a sweet Robin *robin" that's calling?
Thank you for sharing!
C'mon spring!
diane
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hello Mystery Writer!
You have encapsulated my feeling regarding the approach of spring as well! Delightful imagery with rhythmical lines that flow well.
A few edits to consider:
1. But I know it's there, so brimming with fish, (;)
I am called by my friends, "fishing king". ("Fishing King.")
2. Soon, flowers burst forth with colors so bright,
the trees dress in their gown's (gowns) of green
The water and sky sport lovely blue shades, (;)
birds return with their songs so serene.
3. I know that spring's not too far behind,
is that a sweet Robin *robin" that's calling?
Thank you for sharing!
C'mon spring!
diane
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for pointing out my errors, I have fixed them and my poem is better because of you. A thousand times thank you! :)
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My pleasure!
Best wishes!
Diane
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very pretty poem. Makes me long for spring. It's very like the kind of poem County Woman started buying for their back cover around 2 years ago. You might check out that magazine if it's still being published and I rather sure it is. Their rules are rather specific but the pay is good. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Very pretty poem. Makes me long for spring. It's very like the kind of poem County Woman started buying for their back cover around 2 years ago. You might check out that magazine if it's still being published and I rather sure it is. Their rules are rather specific but the pay is good. Best of luck.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this very thoughtful review, I will check into that. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
As I was reading your poem, I felt the dancing of spring blossoms. The buds are creeping through the snow, pushing the snow away so the tulip's can break through the harden crest of ground.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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As I was reading your poem, I felt the dancing of spring blossoms. The buds are creeping through the snow, pushing the snow away so the tulip's can break through the harden crest of ground.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Your review sounds like a beautiful poem. :) Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup, if you close your eyes, thhose beautiful ice flowers can be spring apple flowers:"My fervor for spring will never abate,
as outside the snowflakes keep falling.
I know that spring's not too far behind,
is that a sweet Robin that's calling?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Yup, if you close your eyes, thhose beautiful ice flowers can be spring apple flowers:"My fervor for spring will never abate,
as outside the snowflakes keep falling.
I know that spring's not too far behind,
is that a sweet Robin that's calling?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it's always wonderful to hear from you. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
On this cold January day, your poem paints a beautiful picture of spring, and puts a longing in our hearts to see it come quickly. Very well written, rhyming is great and if flows smoothly.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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On this cold January day, your poem paints a beautiful picture of spring, and puts a longing in our hearts to see it come quickly. Very well written, rhyming is great and if flows smoothly.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate your positive review. :)
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You are very welcome, Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment from Rosalie Lawrence
What a delightful poem about spring. May I offer a couple of pointers: Spring is not a proper noun and is no capitalized unless it begins a sentence). Maybe a comma: "Mother Nature will (,) with her first blush..." I live in a part of Canada where the Robins stick around in winter, if we feed them, so when the Robin calls we love it, as I love your beautiful images and hopeful message.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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What a delightful poem about spring. May I offer a couple of pointers: Spring is not a proper noun and is no capitalized unless it begins a sentence). Maybe a comma: "Mother Nature will (,) with her first blush..." I live in a part of Canada where the Robins stick around in winter, if we feed them, so when the Robin calls we love it, as I love your beautiful images and hopeful message.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your excellent suggestions. I corrected my mistakes, improving my poem thanks to you. I really do appreciate it. :)
