Never Say Can't
He refused to quit.32 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
This is such a wonderful, inspiring story. You did an excellent job of describing your handicap and your aspirations. Your actions also showed your determination to succeed in spite of your handicaps. This should be inspirational for all. It was excellent that you included the quote from Helen Keller. She was certainly an inspiration. I'm glad you persevered until you were accepted for training as an x-ray technician and had a long career in your field. Congratulations. judi
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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This is such a wonderful, inspiring story. You did an excellent job of describing your handicap and your aspirations. Your actions also showed your determination to succeed in spite of your handicaps. This should be inspirational for all. It was excellent that you included the quote from Helen Keller. She was certainly an inspiration. I'm glad you persevered until you were accepted for training as an x-ray technician and had a long career in your field. Congratulations. judi
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you for your kind words and the review you gave me
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You're very welcome. Best wishes to you. judi
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My pleasure. You're very welcome, and I was interested to learn about your personal story. judi
Comment from Jeff Watkins
I suggest you change accomplished to overcame. Also write the sentence about writing a letter like this: In my letter, I didn't mention......
Inspiring story.
My previous review is not adequate. You raised so many issues that it would take a book to cover them all. I believe that you achieved your goal in large part because you believed in yourself. You knew you could do the job.
I got a job teaching in a community college after hundreds of rejections. In some cases there were hundreds of people after the same job. I am considering writing about how I got that job.
I taught writing and literature, but never took a course in creative writing. Now I am trying to learn how to write a short stories that are unforgettable. Damn! that's a steep hill to climb. I will work for months on a short story, sometimes very short story, that people will find unforgettable in a positive way. But just how is one to know when to say that it can't be done? Forget about it. But then you have inspired me to keep trying.
I have a few short stories and a poem ensconced in fanstory. If you read any of them, I hope you will find them as thought provoking as your article.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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I suggest you change accomplished to overcame. Also write the sentence about writing a letter like this: In my letter, I didn't mention......
Inspiring story.
My previous review is not adequate. You raised so many issues that it would take a book to cover them all. I believe that you achieved your goal in large part because you believed in yourself. You knew you could do the job.
I got a job teaching in a community college after hundreds of rejections. In some cases there were hundreds of people after the same job. I am considering writing about how I got that job.
I taught writing and literature, but never took a course in creative writing. Now I am trying to learn how to write a short stories that are unforgettable. Damn! that's a steep hill to climb. I will work for months on a short story, sometimes very short story, that people will find unforgettable in a positive way. But just how is one to know when to say that it can't be done? Forget about it. But then you have inspired me to keep trying.
I have a few short stories and a poem ensconced in fanstory. If you read any of them, I hope you will find them as thought provoking as your article.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from lancellot
A well written piece and great source of inspiration to all whom are open to understanding. Life is not easy and the obstacles are everywhere. Is it fair, no, perhaps there is no such thing, but you will always fail when you don't try.
A great post, and very realistic. No sugarcoating here.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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A well written piece and great source of inspiration to all whom are open to understanding. Life is not easy and the obstacles are everywhere. Is it fair, no, perhaps there is no such thing, but you will always fail when you don't try.
A great post, and very realistic. No sugarcoating here.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
A lovely story about a person (you) who would not let others dictate their abilities or future. I enjoy stories like this and am often in awe of what people achieve against obstacles. Congratulations! Thanks for sharing and good luck to you.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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A lovely story about a person (you) who would not let others dictate their abilities or future. I enjoy stories like this and am often in awe of what people achieve against obstacles. Congratulations! Thanks for sharing and good luck to you.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Hannah Baller
This is a very heart warming story which I thoroughly enjoyed reading, being disabled myself I relate to it when people find my differences difficult.
There were one or two editing errors, the beginning of most sentences there was an indented space which wasn't consistent, just a little tweak is all that's needed here.
"I will review your applicant (application) with the doctors and let you know." Just a minor spelling error there.
My favourite part was:
We are all the same. Our afflictions are different, but to reach our achievements, we need to battle with the barriers before they take control of us.
Thank you for writing this, if this is a biographical piece of work I commend your bravery for putting this out there. It is inspiring.
Never give up on your dreams.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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This is a very heart warming story which I thoroughly enjoyed reading, being disabled myself I relate to it when people find my differences difficult.
There were one or two editing errors, the beginning of most sentences there was an indented space which wasn't consistent, just a little tweak is all that's needed here.
"I will review your applicant (application) with the doctors and let you know." Just a minor spelling error there.
My favourite part was:
We are all the same. Our afflictions are different, but to reach our achievements, we need to battle with the barriers before they take control of us.
Thank you for writing this, if this is a biographical piece of work I commend your bravery for putting this out there. It is inspiring.
Never give up on your dreams.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you and for your suggestions.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm am so glad you put that note beneath your story. I'm also glad you lived by those words of Hellen Keller and refused to give up. Life can throw us some pretty severe curves at time and all of us could accomplish more if we refused to give up. It is great story. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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I'm am so glad you put that note beneath your story. I'm also glad you lived by those words of Hellen Keller and refused to give up. Life can throw us some pretty severe curves at time and all of us could accomplish more if we refused to give up. It is great story. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an exremely poignant true story that addresses the overcoming of a severe physical handicap by sheer willpower and motivation. It is well-written, and the reader can clearly feel the see-saw effect of frustration and desire. I am very glad things worked out so well for you in the end.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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This is an exremely poignant true story that addresses the overcoming of a severe physical handicap by sheer willpower and motivation. It is well-written, and the reader can clearly feel the see-saw effect of frustration and desire. I am very glad things worked out so well for you in the end.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi TPA,
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. As I read it, I didn't really know it was a personal experience. It was so very well written that it drew me in and held my attention throughout. When I got to the end, I realized it was a true story, and that enriched it even more. What a fighter you are. I know your mother is proud of you. I am, too!
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Hi TPA,
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. As I read it, I didn't really know it was a personal experience. It was so very well written that it drew me in and held my attention throughout. When I got to the end, I realized it was a true story, and that enriched it even more. What a fighter you are. I know your mother is proud of you. I am, too!
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you. I honored you gave me 6 stars.
Comment from Wendy G
Bravo! Top marks to you for your courage and perseverance. I very much admire your positive attitude and your resilience. Your story of overcoming is inspirational, and I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Bravo! Top marks to you for your courage and perseverance. I very much admire your positive attitude and your resilience. Your story of overcoming is inspirational, and I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from nova2
Your story has honestly brought me to slight tears. It really reminded me of my own personal story. I recently got diagnosed with Bipolar 1, and it has been a really hard realization for me. This story reminded me that things are going to be hard but continuing to try is most important. And the results of what you want happening is all that is important.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Your story has honestly brought me to slight tears. It really reminded me of my own personal story. I recently got diagnosed with Bipolar 1, and it has been a really hard realization for me. This story reminded me that things are going to be hard but continuing to try is most important. And the results of what you want happening is all that is important.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Please Don't Give Up. take one day at a time, follow Dr's order. there will be hurdles to jump, but take it one day at a time; enroll in a support group. My son has BP and does okay. You could to. You have friends, I'm sure, especially the one in heaven. He always be there to listen, me too. don't hesitate. AND THANKS for reading my story.
