The Tweety show
Tweety was my all-time favourite cartoon, very cute.13 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This cartoon poem, The Tweety Show, brings back another neat memory of those great Warner Brothers characters. Poor Sylvester, his luck was always deth-PIC-able.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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This cartoon poem, The Tweety Show, brings back another neat memory of those great Warner Brothers characters. Poor Sylvester, his luck was always deth-PIC-able.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Cartoon Time writing prompt contest. You fulfilled the rules choosing your favourite childhood cartoon. Good presentation and imagery.
Tweety was terrible to Silvester lol cool cartoon.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Cartoon Time writing prompt contest. You fulfilled the rules choosing your favourite childhood cartoon. Good presentation and imagery.
Tweety was terrible to Silvester lol cool cartoon.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Wendy G
Very well done, and yes, the way he talked certainly brought back memories! You have crafted an excellent poem, so very good wishes for the cartoon contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Very well done, and yes, the way he talked certainly brought back memories! You have crafted an excellent poem, so very good wishes for the cartoon contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thankyou
Comment from Sharon Nolen
I had contemplated writing a poem about Tweetie bird. I loved that cartoon, too. But, I couldn't figure out how to write this. But you nailed it.
Great job.
My only observations are:
Where you quote Tweetie, put his statements in quotation marks.
In your sentence, "In spite of Sylvesters clever attempts to have tweety on his sandwich bread.", I'd like to suggest that you put an apostrophe in Sylvester's name. Otherwise, it looks like Sylvester is plural.
Great job on this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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I had contemplated writing a poem about Tweetie bird. I loved that cartoon, too. But, I couldn't figure out how to write this. But you nailed it.
Great job.
My only observations are:
Where you quote Tweetie, put his statements in quotation marks.
In your sentence, "In spite of Sylvesters clever attempts to have tweety on his sandwich bread.", I'd like to suggest that you put an apostrophe in Sylvester's name. Otherwise, it looks like Sylvester is plural.
Great job on this poem.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thankyou 🙂
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You're welcome.
Comment from Jean Lutz1
My favorite flannel pajamas at almost 81 are Tweety Bird. When I was getting a shot for bone cancer -- now gone -- the nurses would always save the Tweety band-aid for me. Thank you for the stirring of good memories.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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My favorite flannel pajamas at almost 81 are Tweety Bird. When I was getting a shot for bone cancer -- now gone -- the nurses would always save the Tweety band-aid for me. Thank you for the stirring of good memories.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from tfawcus
One of my favourites, too. You certainly brought back some fond memories with this one. I enjoyed hearing all of those catchphrases that you have woven so cleverly into your poem. Good luck with this one in the contest. I think you may have a winner!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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One of my favourites, too. You certainly brought back some fond memories with this one. I enjoyed hearing all of those catchphrases that you have woven so cleverly into your poem. Good luck with this one in the contest. I think you may have a winner!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Julie Sandy
great entry for the competition, a lovely memory from childhood.
tweety and Silvester were a great pair, so fun to watch.
great structure and rhyme.
Good luck in the competition
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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great entry for the competition, a lovely memory from childhood.
tweety and Silvester were a great pair, so fun to watch.
great structure and rhyme.
Good luck in the competition
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Sugarray77
What a cute verse you have written, Joanne... with clever quotes and lovely descriptions. This cartoon has been an all-time favorite of mine too and I am so glad you shared it with us again. Well written!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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What a cute verse you have written, Joanne... with clever quotes and lovely descriptions. This cartoon has been an all-time favorite of mine too and I am so glad you shared it with us again. Well written!!
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Melodie Michelle
I love Tweety Bird and the imagery you choose if absolutely perfect for your poem! This is pretty for the writing prompt entry of Cartoon Time! Best wishes for the win;-)
Thank you mucho for sharing your work and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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I love Tweety Bird and the imagery you choose if absolutely perfect for your poem! This is pretty for the writing prompt entry of Cartoon Time! Best wishes for the win;-)
Thank you mucho for sharing your work and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
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Thank you
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!-)
Comment from kmoss
This show was my favorite as well. This is cute, especially white you wrote with tweety's phrasing.
The ending is great, so true.
I do think that show is too repetitive in the first two lines.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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This show was my favorite as well. This is cute, especially white you wrote with tweety's phrasing.
The ending is great, so true.
I do think that show is too repetitive in the first two lines.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Ok thanks
