My book on dogs
It was so hard to write10 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Very humorous, and a well- written short 5-7-5 piece. Not the ending we expected, which is exactly what you want to achieve. I like the artwork to go with it. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Very humorous, and a well- written short 5-7-5 piece. Not the ending we expected, which is exactly what you want to achieve. I like the artwork to go with it. Best wishes.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Many thanks Weny. So glad you liked it.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the picture you have. You could write many books on dogs and still not have everything known about them. Somehow this piece makes me feel like the dog would get a hold of the book and have a little fun.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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I love the picture you have. You could write many books on dogs and still not have everything known about them. Somehow this piece makes me feel like the dog would get a hold of the book and have a little fun.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thanks Mia
Comment from Barrie Godwin
I could say it was kinda obvious but only at the end. Benefit of hindsight. You got me. Funny. Especially nice when tied to the graphic. Good luck. Cant think of anything not to like.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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I could say it was kinda obvious but only at the end. Benefit of hindsight. You got me. Funny. Especially nice when tied to the graphic. Good luck. Cant think of anything not to like.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Many thanks Barrie
Comment from zanya
Yes here's a poem in short format of 5-7-5 that succeeds in bringing a smile - the vagaries of language and how we can tell a totally different tale with our word juxtaposition !!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Yes here's a poem in short format of 5-7-5 that succeeds in bringing a smile - the vagaries of language and how we can tell a totally different tale with our word juxtaposition !!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thanks Zanya
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. You got me with the title I love dogs and then you got a big laugh out of me. Easy fun read, good use of 17 syllables, supported well by the art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Very good. You got me with the title I love dogs and then you got a big laugh out of me. Easy fun read, good use of 17 syllables, supported well by the art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, glad you liked it.
Comment from lancellot
Well, that is a nice play on words. I didn't see it at first and admit I had to read it three times to get the twist with the word 'on'. This one is different and that will garner it multiple views and spark curiosity.
I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Well, that is a nice play on words. I didn't see it at first and admit I had to read it three times to get the twist with the word 'on'. This one is different and that will garner it multiple views and spark curiosity.
I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A little bit sarcastic but funny:) what an ide to write on dogs:) "Wrote a book on dogs
Think maybe it would have been
better on paper" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the comtest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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A little bit sarcastic but funny:) what an ide to write on dogs:) "Wrote a book on dogs
Think maybe it would have been
better on paper" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the comtest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Susan Newell
Well, you left me laughing as I pictured a huge pack of dog covered in script. How did you get them to hold still? This has a particularly good chance of winning the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Well, you left me laughing as I pictured a huge pack of dog covered in script. How did you get them to hold still? This has a particularly good chance of winning the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thanks Susan. So gla you liked it.
Comment from JLR
Your 5-7-5 is technically correct, the image represents the narrative and there go be considered some humor if you do not have to clean up the mess. Good luck in the voting booth
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Your 5-7-5 is technically correct, the image represents the narrative and there go be considered some humor if you do not have to clean up the mess. Good luck in the voting booth
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from donette1914
very cute of your poem
ones are drawn in with your words
well penned poem
very cleaver story line and a photo that go's perfect.
I hope for the best in the contest
thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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very cute of your poem
ones are drawn in with your words
well penned poem
very cleaver story line and a photo that go's perfect.
I hope for the best in the contest
thank you for sharing
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Many thanks
