God's Word In Us (The Dance)
In the beginning was the Word and the Word was God.6 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A very powerful and beautiful poem, and I did enjoy the comparison between the joy of God and His Creation with a dance. Your poem is a lovely summary of the plan of salvation! Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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A very powerful and beautiful poem, and I did enjoy the comparison between the joy of God and His Creation with a dance. Your poem is a lovely summary of the plan of salvation! Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Blessings Wendy, thank you so much for your 6 star rating and review. I appreciate your kind words and insightful comments
Comment from royowen
And the word become flesh and dwelt among us. John 1:14. What a marvellous verse in John, the giver of life. This is beautifully written, I love how it starts out and burgeons into meaning. I love this paraphrased relatable to God, I love the biblical way you followed with your narrative, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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And the word become flesh and dwelt among us. John 1:14. What a marvellous verse in John, the giver of life. This is beautifully written, I love how it starts out and burgeons into meaning. I love this paraphrased relatable to God, I love the biblical way you followed with your narrative, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much Roy for your excellent review and rating. Your insightful and encouraging comments as well.
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Well done
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this well-written piece. I'm not really a Christian myself, but my mother is very involved in the Baptist church and would appreciate your poem immensely. Good luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Congratulations on this well-written piece. I'm not really a Christian myself, but my mother is very involved in the Baptist church and would appreciate your poem immensely. Good luck with the competition.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Blessings and thank you for your excellent review and rating, I pray your mother enjoys it as well.
Comment from Hannah Baller
This is a very powerful, and thought-evoking poem that is really striking. It's apt to the praise that worshippers give to God, and captures the emotion behind worship. Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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This is a very powerful, and thought-evoking poem that is really striking. It's apt to the praise that worshippers give to God, and captures the emotion behind worship. Beautifully done!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Blessings Hannah and thank you for your excellent review and rating. I appreciate your insight and comments.
Comment from Sally Law
This is truly a beautiful and spiritual offering for this contest. The first gospel I read was the Gospel of John. I'm so glad to see that this was based on that wonderful book. It told me so much in plain terms about God and how he created the earth. Beautifully pending illustrated for the contest win. Sending my very best and blessings always, Sally XOs...
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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This is truly a beautiful and spiritual offering for this contest. The first gospel I read was the Gospel of John. I'm so glad to see that this was based on that wonderful book. It told me so much in plain terms about God and how he created the earth. Beautifully pending illustrated for the contest win. Sending my very best and blessings always, Sally XOs...
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Blessings Sally and thank you for your excellent review and rating. Yes the Gospel of John is my favorite as well. The first person I ever lead to the Lord was by simply doing a Bible study on this Gospel. By the fourth chapter he converted on his own, and said " I now know what salvation is".
Comment from LisaMay
I love the motif you have used of the scroll spreading out and creativity entering the world through prose, verse, and dance. "Christ - the Word in us!" is a powerful concluding line... with an unfolding story from joy and innocence, to Satan and Jesus, and the ultimate truth in between. Your poem is well worthy of the 6. I expect it to win the prompt.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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I love the motif you have used of the scroll spreading out and creativity entering the world through prose, verse, and dance. "Christ - the Word in us!" is a powerful concluding line... with an unfolding story from joy and innocence, to Satan and Jesus, and the ultimate truth in between. Your poem is well worthy of the 6. I expect it to win the prompt.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your exceptiona review and six star rating. thanks for your encouraging words.
