Best Gift Ever
My Valentine is the...12 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Very beautiful
Valentine poem. I love this part . Worth more than flowers candies wine. His gentle touch his love divine. It's so true. It's the little things that's important. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
This is a Very beautiful
Valentine poem. I love this part . Worth more than flowers candies wine. His gentle touch his love divine. It's so true. It's the little things that's important. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this stellar review, it's wonderful. :)
Comment from Wendy G
Well done, lovely poem. Yes, true love does not necessarily retain all the flowers and chocolates etc, but is manifested in all the ordinary aspects of having a best friend to love and share life with, in a very meaningful way. Well written.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
Well done, lovely poem. Yes, true love does not necessarily retain all the flowers and chocolates etc, but is manifested in all the ordinary aspects of having a best friend to love and share life with, in a very meaningful way. Well written.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
Comment from juliaSjames
You are right. The heady days of courtship and marriage do give way to a sustained relationship between life partners. Not so exciting perhaps but deeply satisfying all the same. And it makes the occasional romantic gift that more special.
Excellent rhyme and meter make for a smooth read.
Very nicely done! Happy Valentine's and good luck in the contest.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
You are right. The heady days of courtship and marriage do give way to a sustained relationship between life partners. Not so exciting perhaps but deeply satisfying all the same. And it makes the occasional romantic gift that more special.
Excellent rhyme and meter make for a smooth read.
Very nicely done! Happy Valentine's and good luck in the contest.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Happy valentine's day to you! :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Very nice entry for the Valentines Day writing prompt contest. You use excellent descriptive words of classic Valentine's day topic. Your idea that Valentine's typical presents and romance diminish with time but necessarily the love and that's what matters. I like the presentation.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
Hello anonymous
Very nice entry for the Valentines Day writing prompt contest. You use excellent descriptive words of classic Valentine's day topic. Your idea that Valentine's typical presents and romance diminish with time but necessarily the love and that's what matters. I like the presentation.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you, you always write the best reviews. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully formatted and illustrated for the contest. My pick for the contest in form, theme, and presentation. I wish you all the best! Happy Valentine's Day!
Sally :))
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
Beautifully formatted and illustrated for the contest. My pick for the contest in form, theme, and presentation. I wish you all the best! Happy Valentine's Day!
Sally :))
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your vote and for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from jaded831
At first I didn't know where you were going, you surprised me with a deep, romantic ending. Great for the contest theme. Your words made me smile, for that you get a thumbs up.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
At first I didn't know where you were going, you surprised me with a deep, romantic ending. Great for the contest theme. Your words made me smile, for that you get a thumbs up.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from AnnaLinda
Mystery poet,
You've got really finely rhymed lines and a super
real love poem you've written for your Valentine's Day
prompt entry. I have no way of knowing if this is a
real life experience..but, if this is true...
"Just find a heart that's always true,
you've found the perfect one for you.
I still like flowers and all the rest,
but loving him is the very best."
You must be blessed. Good luck in the contest,
AnnaLinda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
Mystery poet,
You've got really finely rhymed lines and a super
real love poem you've written for your Valentine's Day
prompt entry. I have no way of knowing if this is a
real life experience..but, if this is true...
"Just find a heart that's always true,
you've found the perfect one for you.
I still like flowers and all the rest,
but loving him is the very best."
You must be blessed. Good luck in the contest,
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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I am! I met an amazing man and we've been married 42 years. Thank you so much for reading my poem. :)
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Congrats on 42 years!
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
In a nutshell, you said it best
true companionship outdoes the rest
flowers and candy will all go away
but a true lover will always stay
good luck in the contest
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
In a nutshell, you said it best
true companionship outdoes the rest
flowers and candy will all go away
but a true lover will always stay
good luck in the contest
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from E. Denison
This is an impressive entry for the Valentines Day contest. I have read many of these today, and this is the only one I've seen so far that speaks to the journey love takes through a relationship, how it twists and turns, but so long as you are with "the one" can turn into something different but still beautiful in the end. Excellent use of the bokeh effect in your photo as well (I always think the heart shape is one of the best uses for this). Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
This is an impressive entry for the Valentines Day contest. I have read many of these today, and this is the only one I've seen so far that speaks to the journey love takes through a relationship, how it twists and turns, but so long as you are with "the one" can turn into something different but still beautiful in the end. Excellent use of the bokeh effect in your photo as well (I always think the heart shape is one of the best uses for this). Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you, that's very kind of you to say. I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from lancellot
Well, yes, it is a poem that is very real. It speaks of how romance, love and relationship are in the world outside of romance novels and movies. In the end if you have good life, and real love then you are ahead of the game.
A very well made entry.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
Well, yes, it is a poem that is very real. It speaks of how romance, love and relationship are in the world outside of romance novels and movies. In the end if you have good life, and real love then you are ahead of the game.
A very well made entry.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it's much appreciated. :)