payer for America's Future
prayer for America's future5 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Did you mean Prayer for America rather than Payer for America
Otherwise in any case you have written a very good poem. Historically, there are many who have paid and are still paying in many ways for the future of America. And it looks like future generations will continue to pay dearly. It is important to change to have conversation for equality, aimed at creating, sincere acceptance of a fairer and more level playing field, showing always, respect for human rights and diversity for the who-so-ever in spite of differences of opinion. This will require genuine integrity, faith and trust in process always aimed at moving forward.
All of the latter is indicating a required need for prayer
Therefore I am giving you a four star rating regardless of whether or not you meant prayer rather than payer.
If so you can always edit it.
All the best.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Did you mean Prayer for America rather than Payer for America
Otherwise in any case you have written a very good poem. Historically, there are many who have paid and are still paying in many ways for the future of America. And it looks like future generations will continue to pay dearly. It is important to change to have conversation for equality, aimed at creating, sincere acceptance of a fairer and more level playing field, showing always, respect for human rights and diversity for the who-so-ever in spite of differences of opinion. This will require genuine integrity, faith and trust in process always aimed at moving forward.
All of the latter is indicating a required need for prayer
Therefore I am giving you a four star rating regardless of whether or not you meant prayer rather than payer.
If so you can always edit it.
All the best.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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thanks
Comment from Reese Turner
Your title, "Payer for America's Future" might be a typo, but it sure sums it up! Gasoline is up by 22% since Jan 1 - working people must PAY to get to work. The number of ILLEGALS crossing the border exceeds the number of WORKING people who have lost their jobs since Jan 20th. I will be a PAYER for their future. Gas will be over $3 per gallon, unemployment will skyrocket, factories which make things in America will start leaving again for China. We will be PAYERs for the unemployment. Yep, you nailed it: Payer for America's Future.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Your title, "Payer for America's Future" might be a typo, but it sure sums it up! Gasoline is up by 22% since Jan 1 - working people must PAY to get to work. The number of ILLEGALS crossing the border exceeds the number of WORKING people who have lost their jobs since Jan 20th. I will be a PAYER for their future. Gas will be over $3 per gallon, unemployment will skyrocket, factories which make things in America will start leaving again for China. We will be PAYERs for the unemployment. Yep, you nailed it: Payer for America's Future.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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love it the typo works, but I will revise it as Prayer (Payer) for America's Future.
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Proud to have been of service.
Comment from LisaMay
I'm assuming you meant to write 'Prayer' in your poem's title - or are you suggesting that Trump must pay for America's future? He sure inflicted a cost! Your simple plea is for unity and cooperation - good luck with that! Trump did so much damage.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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I'm assuming you meant to write 'Prayer' in your poem's title - or are you suggesting that Trump must pay for America's future? He sure inflicted a cost! Your simple plea is for unity and cooperation - good luck with that! Trump did so much damage.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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love it the typo works, but I will revise it as Prayer (Payer) for America's Future.
Comment from L. Kalere
I've never seen a contest with so many rules! But you played nice, and didn't say anything mean, which is difficult to do when discussing politics. Good job...best of luck in the contest.
Linda
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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I've never seen a contest with so many rules! But you played nice, and didn't say anything mean, which is difficult to do when discussing politics. Good job...best of luck in the contest.
Linda
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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love it the typo works, but I will revise it as Prayer (Payer) for America's Future.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
How difficult is it to achieve this? "My prayer is that both parties
Will begin to put country first
And overcome the bitterness
Of our recent past" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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How difficult is it to achieve this? "My prayer is that both parties
Will begin to put country first
And overcome the bitterness
Of our recent past" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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love it the typo works, but I will revise it as Prayer (Payer) for America's Future.