We The People
We're supposed to be in charge19 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
Great entry just found out this is the contest winner, placed second but no notice of 2nd placing as of yet.
Prize placing Ribbons and pool seems to have been dispersed? Congratulations at any rate. Enjoyable entry.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Great entry just found out this is the contest winner, placed second but no notice of 2nd placing as of yet.
Prize placing Ribbons and pool seems to have been dispersed? Congratulations at any rate. Enjoyable entry.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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You should check on that, get your ribbon. Congratulations on your win...thanks for reading mine. :)
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Thanks for the advice.
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Well-deserved win on this, congrats!! You described the positive qualities of BOTH parties perfectly, they each have their positives and negatives as does everything in this world! Great entry!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Well-deserved win on this, congrats!! You described the positive qualities of BOTH parties perfectly, they each have their positives and negatives as does everything in this world! Great entry!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for this great review, I appreciate it. :)
Comment from AnnaLinda
Boogienights,
Congratulations on your first place win in this writing prompt. I see why
this outstanding piece won. That was a challenging prompt and you pulled it off with grace and skill.
I surely enjoyed reading and admire your ability to stay nuetral and your thoughts expressed in the concluding paragraph are perfect.
Love your vibrant presentation and art choice,
Anna
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Boogienights,
Congratulations on your first place win in this writing prompt. I see why
this outstanding piece won. That was a challenging prompt and you pulled it off with grace and skill.
I surely enjoyed reading and admire your ability to stay nuetral and your thoughts expressed in the concluding paragraph are perfect.
Love your vibrant presentation and art choice,
Anna
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, It means a lot to me. :)
Comment from greyson ernst
this is amazing i love your writing though the purple writing i would change it to blue. purple is a little much but anyways amaing picture and as always keep writing and stay safe have a good weekend
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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this is amazing i love your writing though the purple writing i would change it to blue. purple is a little much but anyways amaing picture and as always keep writing and stay safe have a good weekend
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review. I used purple because it a cross between red and blue...the political party colors....my daughters idea. :) Thank you for this stellar review, it's very appreciated. :)
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oh you should make the middle line purple maybe because its in between
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Everyone has their options when it comes to politics. It is impossible to draw the line. The best is to let our justice stem takes care of it.
The poem is well written. Opinions are expressed by the author. we the people, hope the two parties can work together to save America. All I can say we are in trouble...economy, racism, violence...
Good writing work.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Everyone has their options when it comes to politics. It is impossible to draw the line. The best is to let our justice stem takes care of it.
The poem is well written. Opinions are expressed by the author. we the people, hope the two parties can work together to save America. All I can say we are in trouble...economy, racism, violence...
Good writing work.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I agree that trouble looms for this country, I worry because our current leadership is putting America last. Thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Mary Jane Y
You did a great job following the rules of this contest. I like that you ended on a good note and you didn't bring the hate that floods our country in your writing,
I hope you do well with this.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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You did a great job following the rules of this contest. I like that you ended on a good note and you didn't bring the hate that floods our country in your writing,
I hope you do well with this.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this great review, I actually won! I appreciate you taking time to read my poem. :)
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Wonderful. Good for you
Comment from T.E. Loper
Congratulations on your first place finish! It looks like we all managed to stick to the contest rules. Hooray for all us entrants! It was a challenge though, wasn't it?
The mention of guns in conjunction with healing is a little off-putting to me, but it balances with your pro-choice stance, so never mind!
I haven't read all the comments yet, but has anyone mentioned how cool it is that "America" is in the exact center of the poem? That was very nicely done! The middle is certainly where we heal in politics.
Tom
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Congratulations on your first place finish! It looks like we all managed to stick to the contest rules. Hooray for all us entrants! It was a challenge though, wasn't it?
The mention of guns in conjunction with healing is a little off-putting to me, but it balances with your pro-choice stance, so never mind!
I haven't read all the comments yet, but has anyone mentioned how cool it is that "America" is in the exact center of the poem? That was very nicely done! The middle is certainly where we heal in politics.
Tom
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. I think all the entries were fantastic, so I'm really surprised I won....and yes, I agree, it wasn't easy!..lol. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
A job well done on this poem. You hit the nail right on the head. Everyone needs to settle down and work together for the good of all the people no matter of color or creed. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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A job well done on this poem. You hit the nail right on the head. Everyone needs to settle down and work together for the good of all the people no matter of color or creed. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this very nice review, I really appreciate your thoughtful comments. :)
Comment from Wendy G
A clearly written poem on the theme, with a smooth flow and good rhythm, with unforced rhyme. You have presented both sides fairly, and drawn an unmistakable and wise conclusion. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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A clearly written poem on the theme, with a smooth flow and good rhythm, with unforced rhyme. You have presented both sides fairly, and drawn an unmistakable and wise conclusion. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments, they are very appreciated. :)
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this very positive review, it's really appreciated. :)
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You're welcome!