The Fairy Dance
An annual event15 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Henderson
This was an enchanting and delightful read. Your words evoked beautiful and colorful pictures in my mind's eye. I could easily envision this as a beautiful children's book much like the large bedtime storybooks that I recall from childhood. If you could find a quality illustrator to paint the pictures that you have written you will have a delightful book. Well done!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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This was an enchanting and delightful read. Your words evoked beautiful and colorful pictures in my mind's eye. I could easily envision this as a beautiful children's book much like the large bedtime storybooks that I recall from childhood. If you could find a quality illustrator to paint the pictures that you have written you will have a delightful book. Well done!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I really appreciate those shining stars. :)
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A wonderful poem about dancing fairies, full of rich imagery and vivid scenes of joy and revelry. The theme of the piece is clear throughout. The artwork and the cheerful background chosen to accompany the poem enhance its presentation and draw the reader into the fairy world. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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A wonderful poem about dancing fairies, full of rich imagery and vivid scenes of joy and revelry. The theme of the piece is clear throughout. The artwork and the cheerful background chosen to accompany the poem enhance its presentation and draw the reader into the fairy world. Excellent work.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it means a lot to me that you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from nancyjam
What a beautiful entry for this contest. The imagery is amazing - very imaginative and creative.
Strong meter and rhyme add to the pleasure of reading.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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What a beautiful entry for this contest. The imagery is amazing - very imaginative and creative.
Strong meter and rhyme add to the pleasure of reading.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you, that's so nice of you to say. :)
Comment from Possummagic
How beautiful. My mother told us tales of long ago, one of which resonated with me when I read this truly lovely descriptive work. You probably won't find it anywhere but it was called the "Elf and the dormouse" this is truly lovely and evoked many moments of my childhood. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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How beautiful. My mother told us tales of long ago, one of which resonated with me when I read this truly lovely descriptive work. You probably won't find it anywhere but it was called the "Elf and the dormouse" this is truly lovely and evoked many moments of my childhood. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I'm glad it brought back happy memories. I appreciate you taking time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Fairy Dance, presented in iambic tetrameter and an ABCB rhyme scheme, draws the reader in to witness the fun-filled frolic of the fairies in the foresy. Neat.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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This poem, The Fairy Dance, presented in iambic tetrameter and an ABCB rhyme scheme, draws the reader in to witness the fun-filled frolic of the fairies in the foresy. Neat.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this great review. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from DeboraDyess
Lovely and fun, I can certainly see a little girl loving this!
My only 'complaint' (if you can call it that) is that the meter isn't always quite right. Most of the lines are 8 syllables but you vary a bit, down to 7 or up to 9. Not the biggest deal in the world. :)
Blessings and best in the contest!
Deb
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Lovely and fun, I can certainly see a little girl loving this!
My only 'complaint' (if you can call it that) is that the meter isn't always quite right. Most of the lines are 8 syllables but you vary a bit, down to 7 or up to 9. Not the biggest deal in the world. :)
Blessings and best in the contest!
Deb
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this nice review. I don't pay as much attention to sllyables as I should..lol. Thanks again for reading. :)
Comment from equestrik
This is a sweet tale and I really enjoyed the sing-song rhythm of the writing. The picture is full of whimsy and fun. I noyed it and wish you all the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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This is a sweet tale and I really enjoyed the sing-song rhythm of the writing. The picture is full of whimsy and fun. I noyed it and wish you all the best in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you, this great review means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
A very nice poem eloquently written for the faires, It sounds like they had a lot of fun all packed into the one evening. Your words are very descriptive and I could see the whole dance going on. Your picture enhances your poem completely. Great job! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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A very nice poem eloquently written for the faires, It sounds like they had a lot of fun all packed into the one evening. Your words are very descriptive and I could see the whole dance going on. Your picture enhances your poem completely. Great job! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you, what a nice review! I appreciate you taking time to read my poem.:)
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You're very welcome!
Patty
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written fairy poem. Very nice flow and rhyme scheme. Nice overall presentation. Beautiful
Photo to complement your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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This is a nicely written fairy poem. Very nice flow and rhyme scheme. Nice overall presentation. Beautiful
Photo to complement your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from zanya
A wonderful poetic creation of the Fairies and their nocturnal activities - the reader is captivated from the outset by the preparations for the pending celebrations - a treat for the little folk too!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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A wonderful poetic creation of the Fairies and their nocturnal activities - the reader is captivated from the outset by the preparations for the pending celebrations - a treat for the little folk too!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate this fine review. :)
