The Fairy Dance
An annual event15 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
This is lovely.
In fine meter with a sound rhyme scheme, your imagery is exquisite as the description of the setting, the fairies, the food, (as I said, everything!) etc are down to the finest detail.
It is well paced with a definite beginning and ending to the fairies special night.
I enjoyed this very much.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Hello :)
This is lovely.
In fine meter with a sound rhyme scheme, your imagery is exquisite as the description of the setting, the fairies, the food, (as I said, everything!) etc are down to the finest detail.
It is well paced with a definite beginning and ending to the fairies special night.
I enjoyed this very much.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you, that's awesome of you. I really appreciate this stellar review, it means a great deal to me. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine fairytale of a fairy in your well rhymed post and I enjoyed your dragonfly ride here and this is an ideal entry for the contest, fairies flying everywhere filling the sky with joy, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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A fine fairytale of a fairy in your well rhymed post and I enjoyed your dragonfly ride here and this is an ideal entry for the contest, fairies flying everywhere filling the sky with joy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, I'm glad you like it. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a sweet and magical poem! I love it so much and just know that kids would to! I seriously can't imagine how this entry wouldn't win! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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This is such a sweet and magical poem! I love it so much and just know that kids would to! I seriously can't imagine how this entry wouldn't win! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this exceptional review. :)
Comment from Michele Harber
What a lovely poem, and one in which every young girl would delight. Your words are very descriptive, and paint such a beautiful, sweet and innocent portrait of this fairie gathering. The poem is so much fun, with a lovely flow and well-chosen rhymes. I love that you touch on every aspect of the party, from guests to food to furnishings to decorations to activities. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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What a lovely poem, and one in which every young girl would delight. Your words are very descriptive, and paint such a beautiful, sweet and innocent portrait of this fairie gathering. The poem is so much fun, with a lovely flow and well-chosen rhymes. I love that you touch on every aspect of the party, from guests to food to furnishings to decorations to activities. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's very appreciated. :)
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think you have a winner here. Your poem is such a delightful story in miniature:"The dragonflies were giving rides,
much to the fairies great delight.
Though they can fly, it was such fun,
to ride the dragonflies that night.
A magic wind collected dreams,
and wishes that were made that night.
Each fairy made one wish come true,
catching each one in its flight." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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I think you have a winner here. Your poem is such a delightful story in miniature:"The dragonflies were giving rides,
much to the fairies great delight.
Though they can fly, it was such fun,
to ride the dragonflies that night.
A magic wind collected dreams,
and wishes that were made that night.
Each fairy made one wish come true,
catching each one in its flight." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this fine review.....and the fairies thank you as well. :)
