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Pachyderm Packs Up

Witty 5-7-5 about an animal

3 total reviews 
Comment from Jean Lutz1
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Not happening, dahlin'. We will make a comeback. We never forget. Now for that donkey -- stop mistreating that ass. Why not choose that feathered bird that buries head in sand? Artwork and words work together and I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
    Most entertaining review I have ever received! :-) Thank you for reading and stopping by. It's much appreciated. Hugs.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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With the way elephants in the wild are treated, I understand why this one packed and left. Good play on the word trunk. Your syllable count is correct per line. Your elephant is portrayed as witty. Best wishes.
Respectfully Jan

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Thank you for reviewing and for your comments. Hugss.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Thank you for reviewing and for your comments. Hugss.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Terrific closing line for your pachyderm post. I too like to use FanArt for my posts. Your selection is a great example of how effective that service is to the FS community. Good luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
    Thank you! I agree with you about fanart review. I use it all the time. Thanks again for reading and stopping by. Hugs.