Come Walk With Me
A rhyming love poem.13 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I think this might be my favorite in a sea of favorites. A gorgeous offering and so romantic. Sending you my best today and six stars,
Sal XOs.....xo....
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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I think this might be my favorite in a sea of favorites. A gorgeous offering and so romantic. Sending you my best today and six stars,
Sal XOs.....xo....
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you ever so much. I truly appreciate your friendship, and the review with its six stars is also great.
Comment from RodG
I can HEAR the Speaker whispering this refrain to his bride on their wedding day, describing the adventures which will be their life together. I am an old romantic who still likes to hear these sentiments.
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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I can HEAR the Speaker whispering this refrain to his bride on their wedding day, describing the adventures which will be their life together. I am an old romantic who still likes to hear these sentiments.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your encouraging comments.
Comment from Susan Newell
I like this very much. Going from seashore to prairies to mountains to forests, and eventually to death, as a conjoined pair. Very nice metaphor for life's ups and downs. I believe the present participle of tread is "treading, not "trodding." You also have a problem with "before us does lay." S/b "lie," which messes with your rhyme. I believe you can fix that.
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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I like this very much. Going from seashore to prairies to mountains to forests, and eventually to death, as a conjoined pair. Very nice metaphor for life's ups and downs. I believe the present participle of tread is "treading, not "trodding." You also have a problem with "before us does lay." S/b "lie," which messes with your rhyme. I believe you can fix that.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you for you critique. I will certainly work on it.
