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Viewing comments for Chapter 78 "Tending A Garden of Love"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Minglement
What a lovely, uplifting entry for the Tanka poetry contest. I love the positive flow and energy encouraging hope in all eho read it. Well done. i wish you good luck in the contest .
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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What a lovely, uplifting entry for the Tanka poetry contest. I love the positive flow and energy encouraging hope in all eho read it. Well done. i wish you good luck in the contest .
Comment Written 26-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Bless you for your Encouragement and Reviewing this poem offering.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever use of planting imagery to convey the metaphor--kudos for using title lines to good effect--enhances and complements the theme with fresh phrasing!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Clever use of planting imagery to convey the metaphor--kudos for using title lines to good effect--enhances and complements the theme with fresh phrasing!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering
Comment from Mary Vigasin
What a beautiful and remarkable poem of hope. I love the words "sowing seeds of hope."
Your dad sounded wise, kind and patient. What a wonder gift.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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What a beautiful and remarkable poem of hope. I love the words "sowing seeds of hope."
Your dad sounded wise, kind and patient. What a wonder gift.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Encouragement. Dad is Missed Dearly.
Comment from Wendy G
I like the garden images e.g "Sowing seeds of hope". Because if children have hope they have all they need to work towards a successful outcome in life, and they have self-belief. Well constructed poem. Good wishes for the Tanka contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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I like the garden images e.g "Sowing seeds of hope". Because if children have hope they have all they need to work towards a successful outcome in life, and they have self-belief. Well constructed poem. Good wishes for the Tanka contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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I Thank you for your Time to Read, Rate, and Reviewing this poem offering. God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Growing Peace of Mind
Tending A Garden of Love
by QC Poet
Hello
Great entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice pivot in the third Line. I don't like the picture, I think pictures with words distracts away from poem.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Growing Peace of Mind
Tending A Garden of Love
by QC Poet
Hello
Great entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice pivot in the third Line. I don't like the picture, I think pictures with words distracts away from poem.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Continued Support and Encouragement.
Looking forward to making one for the Club photo
and Membership Acceptance by this month-end. Blessings to you.
Comment from Boogienights
Very well written poem, I like how you compared this hopeful, happy verse to gardening....a renewal. I think this is lovely and very clever, thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Very well written poem, I like how you compared this hopeful, happy verse to gardening....a renewal. I think this is lovely and very clever, thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Valued Reviewing Support and Encouragement.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I like the phrase, 'sowing seeds of hope' without hope we fall into a helpless abyss of sorrow and our optimism reaches for hope to help mend the sorrows, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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I like the phrase, 'sowing seeds of hope' without hope we fall into a helpless abyss of sorrow and our optimism reaches for hope to help mend the sorrows, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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I Thank you for your Continued Support and Encouragement in my Poetry Writing Efforts. God's Blessings be with you.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are promising, hopeful and creative. I pondered on the uplifting theme of these words. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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The author's words are promising, hopeful and creative. I pondered on the uplifting theme of these words. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the Review of this poem and the Supportive Encouragement. Blessings.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Tending A Garden Of Love', is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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'Tending A Garden Of Love', is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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I Thank you for your Support and Encouragement, as Well as the Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering. God Bless you.
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QC Poet,
You're very welcome. God bless you, stay safe! and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from Mia Twysted
There is a positive message to this poem. It encourages people to be kind and suggests, as I do believe, that it will benefit all in the end. It's like a pay it forward situation.
One can plant a tree today knowing it will provide shade for the future generations.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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There is a positive message to this poem. It encourages people to be kind and suggests, as I do believe, that it will benefit all in the end. It's like a pay it forward situation.
One can plant a tree today knowing it will provide shade for the future generations.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Bless you for Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering. The pay it forward aspect really has keep me out of trouble many times. Thanks Again.