Never Forget
a Naani poem10 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
This poem tells a simple truth that we sometimes take for grranted. We won our rights through war and we still try to keep them through it too.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Melissa,
This poem tells a simple truth that we sometimes take for grranted. We won our rights through war and we still try to keep them through it too.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review, Joan.
Melissa
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa
Joan
Comment from equestrik
I love this presentation with the well chosen picture to go with your wonderfully patriotic Naani poem. This is very well done and I wish you all the luck in the upcoming contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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I love this presentation with the well chosen picture to go with your wonderfully patriotic Naani poem. This is very well done and I wish you all the luck in the upcoming contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much equestrik!!! I appreciate it!
Comment from Wendy G
A fine tribute to those who have died for our freedoms. Your Naani poem is a well-written reminder of this, and the accompanying image is just right. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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A fine tribute to those who have died for our freedoms. Your Naani poem is a well-written reminder of this, and the accompanying image is just right. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you Wendy.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
A thoughtful naani poem with syllables that fall within requirement. I like the rhyme - choice / voice - in such a small space. Our forefathers had a tough life paving the way for our future. Their struggle was our freedom. Something to always commemorate. Good job. ~DD
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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A thoughtful naani poem with syllables that fall within requirement. I like the rhyme - choice / voice - in such a small space. Our forefathers had a tough life paving the way for our future. Their struggle was our freedom. Something to always commemorate. Good job. ~DD
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much, DD.
Comment from LisaMay
Your presentation is a great way to reinforce the debt of gratitude we owe to the sacrifices of our forefathers, enabling Americans to live with freedom, a choice, a vote, and a voice... all wrapped together very neatly within the limited syllable requirements.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Your presentation is a great way to reinforce the debt of gratitude we owe to the sacrifices of our forefathers, enabling Americans to live with freedom, a choice, a vote, and a voice... all wrapped together very neatly within the limited syllable requirements.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you Lisa!
Comment from RodG
In this Naani you emphasize in less than 25 syllables why those who serve(d) in the military must be remembered. Because of them we CAN vote and express ourselves. Rod
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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In this Naani you emphasize in less than 25 syllables why those who serve(d) in the military must be remembered. Because of them we CAN vote and express ourselves. Rod
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you Rod
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written Naani poem. I like your words. Our forefathers died to give us freedom , a choice a vote and a voice.... never forget. Very fitting photo to go with your poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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This is a nicely written Naani poem. I like your words. Our forefathers died to give us freedom , a choice a vote and a voice.... never forget. Very fitting photo to go with your poem. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Joanne.
Comment from zanya
Yes, this Naani reminds us of the ultimate price paid by those who went and fought and died on the battlefield and whose sacrifice 'give us freedom'-the ultimate sacrifice made
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Yes, this Naani reminds us of the ultimate price paid by those who went and fought and died on the battlefield and whose sacrifice 'give us freedom'-the ultimate sacrifice made
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you Zanya!
Comment from Susan Newell
Very nice poem for this form, with a terrific message. It's a tribute to every colonist who fought, those who composed and signed our founding documents, and everyone who has served since.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Very nice poem for this form, with a terrific message. It's a tribute to every colonist who fought, those who composed and signed our founding documents, and everyone who has served since.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much, Susan.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your naani is in great form, Mystery Author. Great topic that is well-expressed in true words. The picture is supportive, too. Your message is loud and clear, although don't listen. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Your naani is in great form, Mystery Author. Great topic that is well-expressed in true words. The picture is supportive, too. Your message is loud and clear, although don't listen. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you Jan!
