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Viewing comments for Chapter 81 "A Long Play Record"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
QC POET:
I am imagining some of the younger readers on Fanstory wondering out loud what the heck is a 33 1/3 rpm long play vinyl record! I have lots
of different music genres that I enjoy. WAR would fit into one of them.
Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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QC POET:
I am imagining some of the younger readers on Fanstory wondering out loud what the heck is a 33 1/3 rpm long play vinyl record! I have lots
of different music genres that I enjoy. WAR would fit into one of them.
Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review.
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You're welcome!
Comment from royowen
Long playing records are not seen much these days, although my wife had a marvellous collection of LPs years ago, I'm pretty sure she's stacked them away somewhere. A great reminiscence of a bygone era, although people still collect them from dealers of vinyl. This is smoothly and deftly written, beautifully toned and the money rhyming is perfect for this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Long playing records are not seen much these days, although my wife had a marvellous collection of LPs years ago, I'm pretty sure she's stacked them away somewhere. A great reminiscence of a bygone era, although people still collect them from dealers of vinyl. This is smoothly and deftly written, beautifully toned and the money rhyming is perfect for this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Continued Support and Encouraging Review, Greatly Appreciated. Blessings.
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Most welcome
Comment from Leann DS
This was unique and fiun to read. I can see how the rhymes could easily be put to music. Do you have a genre for the song? Just trying to get a better idea of how it might sound. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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This was unique and fiun to read. I can see how the rhymes could easily be put to music. Do you have a genre for the song? Just trying to get a better idea of how it might sound. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Time to Read, Rate and Review this poem offering. The Beat would most likely be similar to another WAR song by the name of ; So
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great poem with a fun music theme. I like it.
Music is powerful...it can open the heart to so many emotions.
Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images. I would recommend it.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Great poem with a fun music theme. I like it.
Music is powerful...it can open the heart to so many emotions.
Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images. I would recommend it.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Than you for your Review Support and Encouragement.
It's a Great group.
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows that music is important to life. It soothes you and makes you happy. Lets you clear out your emotions my singing and pretend playing along. It can take you into your past.
That sounds like an interesting sounding album with the mix of so many musical genres.
Keep wirting and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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This shows that music is important to life. It soothes you and makes you happy. Lets you clear out your emotions my singing and pretend playing along. It can take you into your past.
That sounds like an interesting sounding album with the mix of so many musical genres.
Keep wirting and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest
dragonpoet
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support, Review, and Encouragement. Blessings to you.
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You're welcome on all accounts, QC.
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Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Wow! This was on the money honey .It brought back memories when music was music
How we use to dance together.
Thank you for sharing those happy yesterday with me.
Cookie
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Wow! This was on the money honey .It brought back memories when music was music
How we use to dance together.
Thank you for sharing those happy yesterday with me.
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Bless you and Thank you for your Support and Review.
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Your very welcome take care.
until next time.
Cookie
Comment from amada
Great poem, luscious theme, enchanting melody. I love each line you write here about music. As a matter of fact, I am reading an audio book about the power of music in the mind and in the body. kweep on listening...
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Great poem, luscious theme, enchanting melody. I love each line you write here about music. As a matter of fact, I am reading an audio book about the power of music in the mind and in the body. kweep on listening...
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I had to stop by when I saw the title. We (meaning my husband) has quite a few LP's and transcription discs. So it caught my attention and I am glad I stopped to read. Your last few stanzas particularly sum up how listening to an LP can be soothing, bring back memories, or excite your musical moment as you place the needle on the track.
Well done on the rhyming, the bringing the music in words.
Thank you for the read
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I had to stop by when I saw the title. We (meaning my husband) has quite a few LP's and transcription discs. So it caught my attention and I am glad I stopped to read. Your last few stanzas particularly sum up how listening to an LP can be soothing, bring back memories, or excite your musical moment as you place the needle on the track.
Well done on the rhyming, the bringing the music in words.
Thank you for the read
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Bless you for your Support and Review.
Comment from palmart
You nicely described how an LP could be considered like "a part of time packed in some musical notes". It is hard to believe that by hearing we can travel in time... And music can be considered a muse to inspire us to write, same as happened with you here: You converted music into a poem!!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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You nicely described how an LP could be considered like "a part of time packed in some musical notes". It is hard to believe that by hearing we can travel in time... And music can be considered a muse to inspire us to write, same as happened with you here: You converted music into a poem!!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review Blessings.
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You`re very welcome, QC Poet!!
Have a great time! Blessings!