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a short story approx 900 words
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Rdfrdmom2
I have to admit that I really didn't see that ending coming. I knew there would be violence somewhere as you placed a warning on your writing, but this was certainly over the top. Remind me not to get too involved with my characters - lol. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
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Earl Corp
Wow, that was different. Great twist at the end. I don't think you really need a Jolene warning on this, but I guess better safe than sorry. Good luck in the contest.
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