Where Are All The Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "The Narrow Escape"A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.
10 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Warren
Oh-oh! What have they done? I would have expected them to shoot out the tires. Now I'm going to be on the edge of my seat till the next chapter! I want to know how they get out of there.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Oh-oh! What have they done? I would have expected them to shoot out the tires. Now I'm going to be on the edge of my seat till the next chapter! I want to know how they get out of there.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story looking forward to the next chapter. That means so much to me. I was afraid everyone was losing interest. I'm glad to hear that isn't true.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Mia Twysted
On the edge of my seat. It did sound to me like he was coming on to her a bit. I wonder why his brother kept the two of them apart. As they were talking I felt the action slow down a bit. It was like a little freeze-frame that allowed them to reminisce and move on emotional as they spoke. Then it speeded back up again as her and the baby ducked down. Nice pace through this chapter.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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On the edge of my seat. It did sound to me like he was coming on to her a bit. I wonder why his brother kept the two of them apart. As they were talking I felt the action slow down a bit. It was like a little freeze-frame that allowed them to reminisce and move on emotional as they spoke. Then it speeded back up again as her and the baby ducked down. Nice pace through this chapter.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for such a heartwarming review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I was worried everyone was losing interest so it's nice to see that isn't true.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Wendy G
This story certainly leaves the reader in suspense, and waiting for further chapters. It is interesting and well written, so I am looking forward to the next.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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This story certainly leaves the reader in suspense, and waiting for further chapters. It is interesting and well written, so I am looking forward to the next.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter that I was able to keep you in suspense. I do hope to hear from you again.
Thank you again for your support. It always means a lot to me. Take care.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mistydawn.
The story moves along with Alejandro's in the attempt to escape the past circumstances. I did think it was a little unusual that Anna was discussing her intimate life with Armando. Of course that was handled in dialogue.
Now that they are feet or yards away from escaping, another surprise shows its ugly head. We'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out what that surprise is. I'm speculating perhaps Armando was hit with a bullet.
Robert
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Hello Mistydawn.
The story moves along with Alejandro's in the attempt to escape the past circumstances. I did think it was a little unusual that Anna was discussing her intimate life with Armando. Of course that was handled in dialogue.
Now that they are feet or yards away from escaping, another surprise shows its ugly head. We'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out what that surprise is. I'm speculating perhaps Armando was hit with a bullet.
Robert
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and, all of your help and support. It always means the world to me. I'm glad that I'm able to keep you interested, in suspense as we near the end. Take care.
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You're welcome
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You are really pulling the reader in, heartstrings, heartstings and all. There's a twinge of anxiety at this thought: "Giving him a suspicious look, I scoot closer to the door. "Thanks, I think." Then the tensions builds. You pulled the reader in closer: I actually was a bit suspicious of Armando with the discovery of thugs. You did a good job of putting that suspicion in our heads: "I glance up to find two goons standing on either side of the gate, machine guns pointing our way." This ends with great suspense...we'll be back.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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You are really pulling the reader in, heartstrings, heartstings and all. There's a twinge of anxiety at this thought: "Giving him a suspicious look, I scoot closer to the door. "Thanks, I think." Then the tensions builds. You pulled the reader in closer: I actually was a bit suspicious of Armando with the discovery of thugs. You did a good job of putting that suspicion in our heads: "I glance up to find two goons standing on either side of the gate, machine guns pointing our way." This ends with great suspense...we'll be back.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for such a kind, encouraging review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The suspense isn't over yet. What lies ahead could change their life for good.
Thank you again for such an encouraging review, all your help support and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Sally Law
This goes from a Hallmark channel movie to Patriot Games in a split second. I'm hoping the young couple can get to safety with that baby!!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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This goes from a Hallmark channel movie to Patriot Games in a split second. I'm hoping the young couple can get to safety with that baby!!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my story. I'm honored. My stories have a tendency to go from good to bad or bad to worse in a heartbeat. One of my reviewers once said they feel sorry for my characters, what I put them through.
Thank you again for reading my chapter, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, take care.
Comment from royowen
A bit more excitement to negotiate and perhaps they'll be free, but I know that they may survive, because fortunately this is your story, and I'm sure it won't end with the death of Anna and the little one, hope marches one. I'm a romantic, well done, an excellent episode, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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A bit more excitement to negotiate and perhaps they'll be free, but I know that they may survive, because fortunately this is your story, and I'm sure it won't end with the death of Anna and the little one, hope marches one. I'm a romantic, well done, an excellent episode, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for all your help, support and encouragement. It always means the world to me. You know me too well, it seems. Anna won't die, neither will Armando but what lies ahead could change their life forever.
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I?m sure
Comment from Ulla
Oh, no. What has happened now? Or more to the point what is happening now. Will nothing ever be right anymore? Don't tell me that Armando has been hit. This is a great chapter. So full of suspense. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Oh, no. What has happened now? Or more to the point what is happening now. Will nothing ever be right anymore? Don't tell me that Armando has been hit. This is a great chapter. So full of suspense. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review and marvelous stars. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Armando hasn't been hit, but what lies ahead may change their life forever.
Thank you again for such an encouraging review, all your help support and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Up one side of the mountain and then off the cliffs on the other side. Up and down just when we think things will change. They might. They could get worse. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Up one side of the mountain and then off the cliffs on the other side. Up and down just when we think things will change. They might. They could get worse. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for your wonderful stars. I'm so glad you liked the roller coaster ride. Their adventure is quite over yet.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from BethShelby
I wrote a review on this but I think I fell asleep and forgot to hit the save button. The time change is getting too me. Anyway, you left us with a big cliff-hanger when we wanted more. The chapter says narrow escape but it sound like it hasn't happened yet. I'm hoping they both escape. I look forward to the next post.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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I wrote a review on this but I think I fell asleep and forgot to hit the save button. The time change is getting too me. Anyway, you left us with a big cliff-hanger when we wanted more. The chapter says narrow escape but it sound like it hasn't happened yet. I'm hoping they both escape. I look forward to the next post.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for such a kind review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and it left you with wanting more. You're right, the two aren't quite free yet.
Thank you again for such an encouraging review, all your help support and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
