Pondering
The reason why? I'm...18 total reviews
Comment from AprilViolet
This poem is exceptional. The way you describe your love for writing is a sentiment that I'm sure many writers on fanstory feel as well. Thank you for sharing such a delightful poem with us.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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This poem is exceptional. The way you describe your love for writing is a sentiment that I'm sure many writers on fanstory feel as well. Thank you for sharing such a delightful poem with us.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this starry review. You don't know how much it means to me. :)
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, these words we write, they are indeed our treasure. And sometimes we just write for the pleasure it brings - or for the relief from pain. Your poem is very good, very well-written, and many will fully identify.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Yes, these words we write, they are indeed our treasure. And sometimes we just write for the pleasure it brings - or for the relief from pain. Your poem is very good, very well-written, and many will fully identify.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much for your great comments. :)
Comment from Susan Newell
I enjoyed this well composed history of your writing career. I'm sure your words have brought much pleasure to many people. I like the couplet presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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I enjoyed this well composed history of your writing career. I'm sure your words have brought much pleasure to many people. I like the couplet presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a beautiful tribute to the art of writing and how it makes you feel. That fact that you enjoy it is the very best reason of all to keep writing! Its amazing that you've kept all your childhood poetry
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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This is a beautiful tribute to the art of writing and how it makes you feel. That fact that you enjoy it is the very best reason of all to keep writing! Its amazing that you've kept all your childhood poetry
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this great six star review. :)
Comment from Alivia64
I started at an early age,
my blank notebook, I filled each page.
With rhymes, that from my heart would spill,
these fledgling poems, I have them still.
I'm not sure what compels me so,
but I must write, this much I know.
And I am grateful every time,
that I touch people with my rhyme.
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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I started at an early age,
my blank notebook, I filled each page.
With rhymes, that from my heart would spill,
these fledgling poems, I have them still.
I'm not sure what compels me so,
but I must write, this much I know.
And I am grateful every time,
that I touch people with my rhyme.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem. Might you have some suggestions on how to improve it. I notice you gave me 4 stars, but didn't really critique anything. It's truly how I learn. Let me know. Thanks again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A well rhymed and poignant write, as writing is cathartic and serves its purpose to sooth us with our achievements, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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A well rhymed and poignant write, as writing is cathartic and serves its purpose to sooth us with our achievements, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and for taking time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
So nice and so true, I guess each of us goes through it: "
My laughter, pain, my joy and tears,
my insecurities and fears,
released from my soul through my verse,
it lightens up my universe.
Why do I write? I guess it's true,
it makes me happy when I do!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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So nice and so true, I guess each of us goes through it: "
My laughter, pain, my joy and tears,
my insecurities and fears,
released from my soul through my verse,
it lightens up my universe.
Why do I write? I guess it's true,
it makes me happy when I do!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from JanPerry
It's lovely with the yellow background. The picture is ancient however, and one of you pondering would really fit the bill.
Punctuation in a poem (commas especially) at the end is so old fashioned. Poetry looks better with no comma or full stop at the end of each line.
Since it's now 2021 and people are still writing a modern take would suit.
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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It's lovely with the yellow background. The picture is ancient however, and one of you pondering would really fit the bill.
Punctuation in a poem (commas especially) at the end is so old fashioned. Poetry looks better with no comma or full stop at the end of each line.
Since it's now 2021 and people are still writing a modern take would suit.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading and for your insightful comments. I appreciate both. :)
