I Don't Sing or Dance
Why I write62 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem is delightful and quite humorous. The most creative aspect of this poem is that, as you read the first two lines of each stanza, you can't guess where the next two lines are going, but after you read them you chuckle. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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This poem is delightful and quite humorous. The most creative aspect of this poem is that, as you read the first two lines of each stanza, you can't guess where the next two lines are going, but after you read them you chuckle. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from L. Kalere
This was just down-right fun to read. I find it's difficult to be introspective and tell the world about all my faults, so I admire someone with the confidence to do so...You seem confident. The meter is a tiny bit off, but the content is so engaging who cares. Well done, best of luck.
Linda
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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This was just down-right fun to read. I find it's difficult to be introspective and tell the world about all my faults, so I admire someone with the confidence to do so...You seem confident. The meter is a tiny bit off, but the content is so engaging who cares. Well done, best of luck.
Linda
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Linda. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, whoever you are. You actually made me laugh and that's the whole point with this wonderful poem. I like it and I think you'll have my vote. Great entry, and good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Hi there, whoever you are. You actually made me laugh and that's the whole point with this wonderful poem. I like it and I think you'll have my vote. Great entry, and good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Ulla. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
Comment from royowen
Yes, the meter was a little shaky, but yes, equally the intent was very good, and your sheer humility was duly noted, I didn't become a writer until I was well into my forties, late in life, even then I wrote songs, I love this, with some quirky rhyming, and self effacement, I was most impressed. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Yes, the meter was a little shaky, but yes, equally the intent was very good, and your sheer humility was duly noted, I didn't become a writer until I was well into my forties, late in life, even then I wrote songs, I love this, with some quirky rhyming, and self effacement, I was most impressed. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
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Most welcome
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Very amusing! Delightful ditty, rife with wry self-deprecating humor. I'll admit that I can cite these many motivations for my having become a writer! Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Very amusing! Delightful ditty, rife with wry self-deprecating humor. I'll admit that I can cite these many motivations for my having become a writer! Good luck.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Janet Foor
A fun little poem of why you write. Don't knock those "radio faces" - I'm married to one. haha
I enjoyed your poem and I'm glad it's what you do.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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A fun little poem of why you write. Don't knock those "radio faces" - I'm married to one. haha
I enjoyed your poem and I'm glad it's what you do.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Janet. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon - this is very well written. We don't know your name or your sex, but we now know a great deal about you, and the reason why you have chosen to write. I'm pretty sure you run yourself down a bit - but it makes a good read. Well done and good luck - warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Hello anon - this is very well written. We don't know your name or your sex, but we now know a great deal about you, and the reason why you have chosen to write. I'm pretty sure you run yourself down a bit - but it makes a good read. Well done and good luck - warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Dorothy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
Comment from Eva Tortora
Great poem! Excellent writing! Wonderful! Honest poem! Great use of words! Great structure! Great title! Nice length! Very expressive! Lovely energy! EVA
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Great poem! Excellent writing! Wonderful! Honest poem! Great use of words! Great structure! Great title! Nice length! Very expressive! Lovely energy! EVA
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Eva. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
Comment from Reese Turner
Your poem meets my criteria: Rhymes, easy to read, above all, makes me smile and something I wish I had written. Enjoyed it. It was like looking in a mirror.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Your poem meets my criteria: Rhymes, easy to read, above all, makes me smile and something I wish I had written. Enjoyed it. It was like looking in a mirror.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I LIKE YOUR POST ABOUT WHY YOU WRITE? I found this to be a very interesting read.
Your words flow like fish in a stream
I cant believe that is the only thing you can do.
If this is true, you keep on write and thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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I LIKE YOUR POST ABOUT WHY YOU WRITE? I found this to be a very interesting read.
Your words flow like fish in a stream
I cant believe that is the only thing you can do.
If this is true, you keep on write and thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Miss Cokkie. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
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Thank you very much Miss Cookie. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
