I Don't Sing or Dance
Why I write62 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
So modest:"
I'm not very bright,
So I keep it light,
With everything I write,
You see my talents are few,
So writing is what I do," Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest,
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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So modest:"
I'm not very bright,
So I keep it light,
With everything I write,
You see my talents are few,
So writing is what I do," Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest,
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from dragonpoet
Well, this poem has a fast moving meter that tells the reasons why you write, in a tongue in cheek way. I think most of us who write are a little shy of public occasions that don't include only family and friends. I write to find out what my true feelings and opinions are.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Well, this poem has a fast moving meter that tells the reasons why you write, in a tongue in cheek way. I think most of us who write are a little shy of public occasions that don't include only family and friends. I write to find out what my true feelings and opinions are.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much dragonpoet I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
hahahaha It's good that you realize exactly what your positive and negative qualities are. No good to spend time WASTING TIME, right? hahaha This was a fun one, and I didn't mind the mixed meter at all. This was a unique poem many of us can relate to. Thanks!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
hahahaha It's good that you realize exactly what your positive and negative qualities are. No good to spend time WASTING TIME, right? hahaha This was a fun one, and I didn't mind the mixed meter at all. This was a unique poem many of us can relate to. Thanks!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Robyn. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Susan Larson
Writing is something we all can do, or at least should do, even if it isn't all that good. And whatever you write, even if not all that good, can serve as a springboard or inspiration for something else. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Writing is something we all can do, or at least should do, even if it isn't all that good. And whatever you write, even if not all that good, can serve as a springboard or inspiration for something else. Keep writing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, I did enjoy this fun and clever write - that, again, in my opinion, was smoothly delivered in easy rhyming rhythm. The meters presented well, as did the presentation in its entirety and in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this inventive piece...
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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In my opinion, I did enjoy this fun and clever write - that, again, in my opinion, was smoothly delivered in easy rhyming rhythm. The meters presented well, as did the presentation in its entirety and in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this inventive piece...
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You're welcome, my pleasure, really...Eve
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This poem is good for the "Why do you write" contest.
Everyone can write. Certainly you can write even though you don't dance or don't sing.
Some like to write poems and some short stories. You can write anything you feel like writing. Every piece of writing is a good one.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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This poem is good for the "Why do you write" contest.
Everyone can write. Certainly you can write even though you don't dance or don't sing.
Some like to write poems and some short stories. You can write anything you feel like writing. Every piece of writing is a good one.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from nomi338
I am one hundred percent with you. When you have the power of the pen, you do not need any of the other talents that will lessen as you age. The power of the pen tends to grow and improve as you add the gravitas of age and maturity to the equation. Fellow writer, you are indeed powerful.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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I am one hundred percent with you. When you have the power of the pen, you do not need any of the other talents that will lessen as you age. The power of the pen tends to grow and improve as you add the gravitas of age and maturity to the equation. Fellow writer, you are indeed powerful.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Boogienights
This is great, I'm in the same boat! There isn't too much I can do, so I string words together and it gives me much satisfaction. I think this is a wonderful contest entry. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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This is great, I'm in the same boat! There isn't too much I can do, so I string words together and it gives me much satisfaction. I think this is a wonderful contest entry. Best of luck.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a lively, rambunctious entry for the why do you write? prompt. I particularly liked the rhymes:
Leery / Query, and how you shifted in stanza 5 to an internal-end rhyme pattern.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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This is a lively, rambunctious entry for the why do you write? prompt. I particularly liked the rhymes:
Leery / Query, and how you shifted in stanza 5 to an internal-end rhyme pattern.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like writing is your only option here? Ha ha ha, it's a good job you have pen and paper and an imagination to conjure up stories and poems, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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It sounds like writing is your only option here? Ha ha ha, it's a good job you have pen and paper and an imagination to conjure up stories and poems, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Dolly. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
