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Spring Freeze

A lune for the contest

4 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Estep
Excellent
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Well done, my friend! I think your graphic was well chosen and I like the way you presented the coming of spring! Winter often does linger, especially up North!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous rating!
Comment from C2
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

While this contest was full of solid entries, I believe this piece rises above the rest. Great photo of frozen blooms and an eloquent metaphor for winter's encore! Very well done.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
    Thank you do much for sharing your thoughts and for the generous rating!
Comment from RodG
Good
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We just had a sample of Winter's one more performance. You convey your message well, but does Winter do the "granting"? I suggest rephrasing line two as "Winter gets" or Winter has" one last performance.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2021

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Excellent
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So true, here, for sure. We always have an Easter freeze. Your lune is in great form, Mystery Writer. I enjoyed reading it. Great job with your word choices, syllable count, image, and message. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
    Thank you!