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Stand firm

Sad times can't last forever

9 total reviews 
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made effective use of your thirteen syllables in this inspirational, thought-provoking poem. The message I get is that unexpected or unwanted changes may cause anxiety, but time and determination will get me through.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
    Thank for your wonderful review, always very much appreciated
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-A well written lune
with a good topic
and description.
-Effective nature
imagery with the tide,
and a good message.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful comments, all very much appreciated
reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Mar-2021
    You are very welcome.
Comment from equestrik
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This is a bit of wisdom here in your words thrown in with this well chosen picture. I agree-what has us wound up tight will come undone and we will be okay in the end.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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    Thank you very much
Comment from Mia Twysted
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This piece tells me time will fix or possibly restore that which was taken back or compounded. But it is the water that helps time undue to damage sone by the sea. I wonder if I see this right?

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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    Thank you very much
Comment from Edward Escobar
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I found your poem as a great metaphor that should awake the attention of those in distress, as I long ago. Like a message directed to the many in need of hope. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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    Thank you very much
Comment from Jean Lutz1
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Well delivered in artwork, color scheme and syllables. Better to flow with the tide than to fight the tide. I wish you well in the Write a Lune writing prompt entry. I see no improvement needed.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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    Thank you very much
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Lune Poem speaks time and tides wait for none, sad times cannot stand forever, as tide comes and goes; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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    Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A poignant write about inevitable change and it is one thing we can rely on as the tide always turns, a philosophical write, much enjoyed and ideal for the prompt, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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    Thank you very much
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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I like the picture... Beware of the tides... They come and then they go away. Stand firm else, they can wash everything away.

I like the poem which says: "when the tide comes in clench your toes ~ time will reverse them."

Life has ups and downs... like the tides... they come and they go..

Thanks for sharing.





 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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    Thank you very much