The Truth Seems Fitting
Which came first, the mirror or the woman...2 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Davis
I very much enjoyed this story. The title ties in extremely well with the content of the girls' conversation as it progresses to reveal two women with several common interests. I like that the connection doesn't end at the bar...and that the chance meeting will mean a step back toward normal social events. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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I very much enjoyed this story. The title ties in extremely well with the content of the girls' conversation as it progresses to reveal two women with several common interests. I like that the connection doesn't end at the bar...and that the chance meeting will mean a step back toward normal social events. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Glad you enjoyed my story. Full disclosure: I am the husband of one and the father of three grown ladies. My research for this offering has been long and expensive.
Comment from Leann DS
wow, that was an interesting story which made me feel a little longing. Now I must go to Victoria's Secret and try on some bras! :-) I'm not a piña colada girl, but I could sure go for a strawberry daiquiri about now. :-)
I noticed one typo at the very beginning, if I may: Elizabeth sat nursing her dry martini near the end of long bar
Should it be... The long bar?
Hope this was helpful, and thank you for sharing! Hugs.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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wow, that was an interesting story which made me feel a little longing. Now I must go to Victoria's Secret and try on some bras! :-) I'm not a piña colada girl, but I could sure go for a strawberry daiquiri about now. :-)
I noticed one typo at the very beginning, if I may: Elizabeth sat nursing her dry martini near the end of long bar
Should it be... The long bar?
Hope this was helpful, and thank you for sharing! Hugs.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your tip and your nice review. I think I note a hint of "I can relate" in your review. I am the husband of one and the father of three ladies. My research on this subject has been long and expensive...