I Love a Pick-a-nick
Bring on Summer63 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Well done. A nice take with fresh eyes. Well worth the win as it impressed from a creative aspect.
Nicely done. Gone to see a bit of originality.
Best wishes.
Have a great week.
RGstar
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Well done. A nice take with fresh eyes. Well worth the win as it impressed from a creative aspect.
Nicely done. Gone to see a bit of originality.
Best wishes.
Have a great week.
RGstar
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much RGstar. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Congratulations! Quite the statement. A fun poem indeed. You used the proper words to create a delightful sentiment with much imagery. Well done.
Ralf
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Congratulations! Quite the statement. A fun poem indeed. You used the proper words to create a delightful sentiment with much imagery. Well done.
Ralf
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Ralf. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi Earl
Firstly, congratulations on your fantastic win, brilliant.
You have certainly made an amusing poem from those words you were 'gifted'.
I enjoyed reading it very much.
Take care, Pete
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Earl
Firstly, congratulations on your fantastic win, brilliant.
You have certainly made an amusing poem from those words you were 'gifted'.
I enjoyed reading it very much.
Take care, Pete
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Pete. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Oh my goodness, Earl!
All of the characters in your photograph bring back so many childhood memories! And yes, I can hear Yogi saying, "pick-a-nic."
Congratulations on your contest win! Such a fun offering!
diane
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Oh my goodness, Earl!
All of the characters in your photograph bring back so many childhood memories! And yes, I can hear Yogi saying, "pick-a-nic."
Congratulations on your contest win! Such a fun offering!
diane
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Diane. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, Yogi's speech patterns are clever to replicate in this excellent piece of yours. And by writing about a picnic, you have used all the words selected for this contest, Yay! I loved the old cartoon characters Yogi Bear and Booboo as well as the Ranger too! I'd say, good luck with the contest, but you've already won!
Jesse
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Yes, Yogi's speech patterns are clever to replicate in this excellent piece of yours. And by writing about a picnic, you have used all the words selected for this contest, Yay! I loved the old cartoon characters Yogi Bear and Booboo as well as the Ranger too! I'd say, good luck with the contest, but you've already won!
Jesse
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Jesse. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You're welcome, Earl!
Your cartoon-themed piece won the hearts of many, I believe, and thus you did well in the contest!
Wonderful!
Have a great week!
Jesse
Comment from jenintorre
Congratulations on your win Earl. It is very deserving and really made me want to be at that pick-a-nick. You used the alloted words really well. Best wishes. Jen
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Congratulations on your win Earl. It is very deserving and really made me want to be at that pick-a-nick. You used the alloted words really well. Best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Jen. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Congratulations on your win with this cute little description of pick-a-nic delights.
The teasing rhymes suggest that we are not intended to take this too seriously - hence the Yogi pronunciation works just fine!
Steve
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Congratulations on your win with this cute little description of pick-a-nic delights.
The teasing rhymes suggest that we are not intended to take this too seriously - hence the Yogi pronunciation works just fine!
Steve
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Steve. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming bit of whimsy--consider putting it to a tune--it has a sing-songy cadence--clever play with pick-a-nic adds to the fun. Thanks for notes on that.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Charming bit of whimsy--consider putting it to a tune--it has a sing-songy cadence--clever play with pick-a-nic adds to the fun. Thanks for notes on that.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a fun write in verse and presentation in its entirety - a clever play on the word, picnic, with your inventive "pick-a-nic" idea. Loved it, and in full compliance with the prompt...
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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In my opinion, a fun write in verse and presentation in its entirety - a clever play on the word, picnic, with your inventive "pick-a-nic" idea. Loved it, and in full compliance with the prompt...
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You are very welcome, Earl, to my delight...Eve
Comment from Gert sherwood
Earl Corp,
I like your poem about writing about when summer decide to come around
Smiles of how used Pick-a-nick
to sound like you are going to have a picnic.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Earl Corp,
I like your poem about writing about when summer decide to come around
Smiles of how used Pick-a-nick
to sound like you are going to have a picnic.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Gert. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
