Lest You Wake
a 6 Word poetic form29 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are lovely, calming and creative. I found this poem
filled with safety, serenity and stillness. The artwork is beautiful and
compliments these words well. Great Poem - thank you!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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The author's words are lovely, calming and creative. I found this poem
filled with safety, serenity and stillness. The artwork is beautiful and
compliments these words well. Great Poem - thank you!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Hello Maria. Thanks so very much. These short ones seem to take me more time than the longer ones. LOL :)
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created a tranquil moonlit night with just six words here Melissa and made the night less fearsome and more welcoming, much enjoyed, the word soft was well used here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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You created a tranquil moonlit night with just six words here Melissa and made the night less fearsome and more welcoming, much enjoyed, the word soft was well used here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you Dolly. These short ones are very hard. Took me 3 hours to come up with it. LOL!
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have chosen six lovely words to describe the mesmerizing sight of
shafts of moonlight filterinng through the trees. Excellent use of personification
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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You have chosen six lovely words to describe the mesmerizing sight of
shafts of moonlight filterinng through the trees. Excellent use of personification
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much dear Janice. :)
Melissa
Comment from Earl Corp
Very cool picture you chose to accompany your poem. The one drawback to reviewing a poem with 36 characters is you have to use 150 characters to review it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Very cool picture you chose to accompany your poem. The one drawback to reviewing a poem with 36 characters is you have to use 150 characters to review it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Hello Earl. Thanks so much for your endeavors to use your allotted 150 characters... it is funny sometimes how that works. LOL. Much appreciated!
Melissa
Comment from Anne Johnston
"moonbeams stroll softly through the night"
Your six words paint such a beautiful picture, "moonbeams strolling", bring peace and calm as we quietly sleep.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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"moonbeams stroll softly through the night"
Your six words paint such a beautiful picture, "moonbeams strolling", bring peace and calm as we quietly sleep.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thanks dear Anne for your lovely comments.
Melissa
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You are welcome
Comment from Sally Law
This is just what the judges look for. Six words that pain a picture. Beautifully penned and illustrated, dear Melissa. A winner here. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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This is just what the judges look for. Six words that pain a picture. Beautifully penned and illustrated, dear Melissa. A winner here. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank so very much, sweet Sal!
Melissa
Comment from robyn corum
Melissa,
Oh, how nice! The personification of these moonbeams means they have gone strolling right before my eyes! But they've never done that before -- wow. That's some strange magic in your pen... I like it!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Melissa,
Oh, how nice! The personification of these moonbeams means they have gone strolling right before my eyes! But they've never done that before -- wow. That's some strange magic in your pen... I like it!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Hello Robyn. Thanks so much for your wonderful review... I think it is your pen that contains the magic!!
Melissa
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Whiiicch makes no sense. But I love you for it. Hugs-
Comment from Pantygynt
I think this is one of the most difficult contests to conform to. There is so little room in those six words to present poetic devices. Since most of these devices are aimed at creating imagery, it is certainly acceptable to create that imagery by any means you can. Reviewers should not be influenced by a pretty picture but by the word choice, and you have achieved it it with your chosen six.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I think this is one of the most difficult contests to conform to. There is so little room in those six words to present poetic devices. Since most of these devices are aimed at creating imagery, it is certainly acceptable to create that imagery by any means you can. Reviewers should not be influenced by a pretty picture but by the word choice, and you have achieved it it with your chosen six.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Hello Jim. Thanks so much for your lovely review!! btw... I noticed you have two signed up for the class. Hope you get more.. :)
Melissa
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is lovely. It makes me want to take a walk under a full moon, in the woods, with the moonlight peeking through the branches. I'd have to take my dogs with me though, because who knows what's lurking in the dark. Ha!
Good luck in the contest. All the best!
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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This is lovely. It makes me want to take a walk under a full moon, in the woods, with the moonlight peeking through the branches. I'd have to take my dogs with me though, because who knows what's lurking in the dark. Ha!
Good luck in the contest. All the best!
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Hello Erika... thank you so much for your wonderful comments!
Melissa
