Heart Crafted Poems -2021
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Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Well-timed post. We are approaching Good Friday and your poem is simply beautiful. Yes, The Savior still shines His Light on this world full of darkness. Great.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Well-timed post. We are approaching Good Friday and your poem is simply beautiful. Yes, The Savior still shines His Light on this world full of darkness. Great.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Kitbok Thank you for this wonderful six-star review! Yes, there is truly a reason to celebrate the blessings of Easter. 👌👌
Comment from QC Poet
Our Faith and dedication to Christianity in your personalized form shine through nicely. Best Wishes to you in the My Faith Poem Contest. Have a Blessed Easter Weekend.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Our Faith and dedication to Christianity in your personalized form shine through nicely. Best Wishes to you in the My Faith Poem Contest. Have a Blessed Easter Weekend.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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QC Poet, thank you and you have a Blessed Easter celebration!
Comment from Mastery
Great stuff, Jim. You have been putting out some wonderful poetry of late, but then you always do, it seems.
These lines were my Favorites:
"'Twas then the sun crested, shining so bright on my life.
Now I am about praying and celebrate the gift He bestowed.
Not one thing can cause me that prior strife ...
I'm a travelin' a different road!
Brilliant, Jim. Bob
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Great stuff, Jim. You have been putting out some wonderful poetry of late, but then you always do, it seems.
These lines were my Favorites:
"'Twas then the sun crested, shining so bright on my life.
Now I am about praying and celebrate the gift He bestowed.
Not one thing can cause me that prior strife ...
I'm a travelin' a different road!
Brilliant, Jim. Bob
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hi Bob, Thank you so much! I do hope that your Easter celebration is full of Love.
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Yours too, my friend. bob
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
This is a truly poem about faith and holding steadfast to your own while those around you take a different approach. Very nicely written and a beautiful entry for the My Faith contest, I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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This is a truly poem about faith and holding steadfast to your own while those around you take a different approach. Very nicely written and a beautiful entry for the My Faith contest, I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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4theloveoftrees, Thank you! I appreciate your validation of my poem about my Faith.
Comment from royowen
I was only saying that the other day, Jesus raises me to my feet, looks me in the face, and says, you are my brother and my friend, you're not my slave, what is mine I give to you to share, no more are you in bondage to sin, you are free. Beautifully written Jim, what a gift, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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I was only saying that the other day, Jesus raises me to my feet, looks me in the face, and says, you are my brother and my friend, you're not my slave, what is mine I give to you to share, no more are you in bondage to sin, you are free. Beautifully written Jim, what a gift, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Roy, Yes My Master reminds we that I AM the Son of God -everyday I marvel at His Goodness.
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Well done
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem uses end rhyme and internal rhyme to describe what Jesus went through and what it means to you. He did so much for those who believe in Him. I like how the last stanza changes rhyme scheme to emphasize the change faith makes in a life.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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This poem uses end rhyme and internal rhyme to describe what Jesus went through and what it means to you. He did so much for those who believe in Him. I like how the last stanza changes rhyme scheme to emphasize the change faith makes in a life.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Joan, thank you! You are the first to remark on that subtle but intended rhyme change. Happy Easter!
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JLR,
You are most kindly welcome.
Happy Easter to you too.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very nice image, Jim,
and an excellent poem.
-It flows well from verse
to verse with effective
imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening
showing how there is
so much complaining,
but then you go on to
give examples of letting
the light in and Him in your life,
"'Twas then the sun crested,
shining so bright on my life."
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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-A very nice image, Jim,
and an excellent poem.
-It flows well from verse
to verse with effective
imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening
showing how there is
so much complaining,
but then you go on to
give examples of letting
the light in and Him in your life,
"'Twas then the sun crested,
shining so bright on my life."
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you very, very much! I was taking a bit of a risk, I felt so your words are gratifying.
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You are very welcome; the risk was worth it. I liked the poem!
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
I enjoyed very much a glimpse into a spiritual journey that has taken, and will take, a lifetime to traverse. As always the sun lights the way, thank you.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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I enjoyed very much a glimpse into a spiritual journey that has taken, and will take, a lifetime to traverse. As always the sun lights the way, thank you.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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So much thanks I send your way!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your poem is a good entry for the contest. Well written. I like your closing lines: "Not one thing can cause me that prior strife ...
I'm a travelin' a different road!"
When we recognize the cross and what it means - Jesus dying for us - we definitely turn around and walk a different road.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Your poem is a good entry for the contest. Well written. I like your closing lines: "Not one thing can cause me that prior strife ...
I'm a travelin' a different road!"
When we recognize the cross and what it means - Jesus dying for us - we definitely turn around and walk a different road.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Anne, so very true and yet ... so many walk paths of darkness. Ugh! Happy Easter Jim
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Happy Easter to you. We pray that the faith we share on here will cause someone to turn to the Lord at this Easter season.
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Yes 🙌 thank you!
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi Jim. I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully constructed verse that is full of meaning and is a theme I can appreciate during this Holy Week ~ new birth/renewed faith. You have done a very good job in the construction of this poem. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Jim. I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully constructed verse that is full of meaning and is a theme I can appreciate during this Holy Week ~ new birth/renewed faith. You have done a very good job in the construction of this poem. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Melissa, my friend, thank you 🙏 and Happy Easter.
