The Last Choice
A view of one's choices over a lifetime.6 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Davis
An interesting presentation of an individual's journey through a past of unrealized opportunity and regrettable choices. And then, the question- what will be the final choice. A powerful, thought provoking story.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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An interesting presentation of an individual's journey through a past of unrealized opportunity and regrettable choices. And then, the question- what will be the final choice. A powerful, thought provoking story.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from irishauthorme
Wow, what a powerful story! Some of our current religions portray and end--of--life scenario just like this, where we are afforded a choice for salvation or eternal damnation. Your description of wandering in the darkness really set the scene for the following story, we have an inherent fear and apprehension of the dark; we are unable to see what lies ahead and are also unbalanced by the lack of a reference point.
The chance at redemption after a wasted lifetime was a satisfying conclusion to your story.
Very well written!
irish
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Wow, what a powerful story! Some of our current religions portray and end--of--life scenario just like this, where we are afforded a choice for salvation or eternal damnation. Your description of wandering in the darkness really set the scene for the following story, we have an inherent fear and apprehension of the dark; we are unable to see what lies ahead and are also unbalanced by the lack of a reference point.
The chance at redemption after a wasted lifetime was a satisfying conclusion to your story.
Very well written!
irish
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your review. We never know when we will take our last breath. We ourselves must be ever watchful and pray for those who have yet to make that right choice..
Comment from Anne Johnston
"You have come to the end of your journey, behind those doors lie eternity. I give you one last opportunity to choose. " I like the scenario you have portrayed here. The sad part is that we do not know how long we have to live, and there may not be a last-minute opportunity. How important it is to surrender our heart to the Lord, and live our lives for Him.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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"You have come to the end of your journey, behind those doors lie eternity. I give you one last opportunity to choose. " I like the scenario you have portrayed here. The sad part is that we do not know how long we have to live, and there may not be a last-minute opportunity. How important it is to surrender our heart to the Lord, and live our lives for Him.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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You speak truth None of us know when we will draw that last breath. We need to be ready and pray diligently for those who don't. Tank you for the review
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You are welcome
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
This is some very fine writing! Talk about being an evangelist! Wow!
No flaws in this post!
Interesting use of "doors" of opportunities lost or missed and decisions made in life and how they effect outcomes.
Perfect entry,
Anna
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Poet,
This is some very fine writing! Talk about being an evangelist! Wow!
No flaws in this post!
Interesting use of "doors" of opportunities lost or missed and decisions made in life and how they effect outcomes.
Perfect entry,
Anna
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thanks again Anna. Appreciate the five star plus review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Interesting walk around live possibilities and choice. I like the best this one:"I wondered to the next room. There was a picture of a lovely home on the wall and I knew it could have been mine, but because of my choices, my home was a cardboard box in a dirty alley,
In another room stood a beautiful woman and three lovely children which I knew were meant to be mine, but I selfishly chose a life without responsibilities. Suddenly, I became overwhelmed by a sense of loneliness that absorbed me completely." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Interesting walk around live possibilities and choice. I like the best this one:"I wondered to the next room. There was a picture of a lovely home on the wall and I knew it could have been mine, but because of my choices, my home was a cardboard box in a dirty alley,
In another room stood a beautiful woman and three lovely children which I knew were meant to be mine, but I selfishly chose a life without responsibilities. Suddenly, I became overwhelmed by a sense of loneliness that absorbed me completely." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Iza for taking to time to review my story. I hope you enjoyed it.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a very thoughtful entry and reflects my own belief that everyone will be given a final choice to accept Jesus, for He said He had left none behind. Some souls will have a longer route no doubt, and more regrets than others. This is an exceptional entry. The choice of all choices.
One typo:
I wondered to the next room -- wandered
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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This is a very thoughtful entry and reflects my own belief that everyone will be given a final choice to accept Jesus, for He said He had left none behind. Some souls will have a longer route no doubt, and more regrets than others. This is an exceptional entry. The choice of all choices.
One typo:
I wondered to the next room -- wandered
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much Susan for taking time to review my story. I pray for all to come to repentance, for it is the will of God.
